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Think of it as improving. Not forcing to do. There are some really good ones out there.
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Your latest chapter...I retain my opinion, it wasn't bad but it could be better, and you need a beta. Longer paragraphs, more description. Same as usual.

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My beta is aquagirl520. She's the best I've found (and I did look through all betas on Adventure for DC, excluding myself). Maybe I'll message you... (or maybe not.
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The incident happened yesterday, but I've made up for it. I only have about 700 words to go. No biggie.
I should be able to get it to my beta today...if I work hard enough...