Caught by Ran

[Rye]

Hope you like it.

"Bye, Agasa-hakase." Shiho went outside finding Shinichi waiting for her. "Aren't you supposed to

wait for Ran, Kudou-kun?" she asked. "Nah, it's okay. Um, I have something to tell you.

Can you have dinner with me tonight?" he asked."I know a nice restaurant." Shiho stood speechless.

"Okay," she said while blushing."Well, we better hurry up."

After school, they met at the place. "Do you like the food?" Shinichi said. "Yeah. It's nice."

She said. Shinichi touched her hand. They were about to kiss when Ran and Sonoko came in.

"Sonoko, this place is-" Ran almosed fainted in shock. "Ran, I can explain-" "Explain what?"

"I waited for you this morning and you show up with her at school. Now I see you two--" Tears fell down her cheek. She grabbed Sonoko's arm and went out. Shinichi and Shiho were in shock too. Of all people, Ran is the person who sees them. After Shinichi paid the bill, both of them went home, having mixed feelings.

[Ran Moorie]

pretty good. You could add more details you know to make the story a little bit more understandable since in some parts it is a little confusing but generally the story is just plain great!

[Rye]

Sorry if it's a bit confusing. I was doing it in a hurry.

[Kiel95]

umm i think that you should specify whether or not ir's mornin or night, if they syndicate is gone... if they have changed back for good... those details that we all are waiting for in the series ^-^ anyways, i'm dyin to read more!

[Scar Akai]

Nice short story...You could have made it longer.