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Thanks for the critic >_< ! I appreciate the tips very much ! i will try to work on that !

Sadness and loneliness is the one thing that you will never dispose nor forget. You don't need love ! your loneliness and imagination will fill up that hole ! If you're hurt by people use those memories to fire you up to make everything perfect ! Perfect doesn't exist . What they call perfect is just a small amount of hope they use to make themself feel good. Nothing can be created unless you give something for it back. Absolute and obedience are things that you will remember you whole life ! To keep yourself safe you need obedience and absolute power ! To confront somebody stronger than you ,you need something that makes up for the lack of power. To get absolute power you need information that can counter somebody. Brains and manipulation can crush people.

Kaishin <3 ! love this one >_<

Thanks you guys ! >_< ! You've helped me much now only clear all my notifications so you guys can pm me <3 !

The light novel is better than everything >_< !

no it's not that critical ! i was planning to let shiho come behind who killed Shinichi but there's actually a greater plot behind it >_< ! that will come in part 2 with a time skip !

yeah liked it >_< !

Love YanMega ! Love the story but the end before the timeskip is kinda rushed ! And Hana going back to school ! How old is she now ! she 1 year older than yankee-kun !

In comparison to nobooty-chan my story sucks ...! My new nick for nobody is nobooty yeah !

You sended rilling of good storyness into my spine ! is that even good spelled ?

Nope Real life friends ! they have nothing with anime/manga ......

i learned that asians in general are scary ... i got some bad memories in chinatown (a chinatown not necesary in US) ...

i'm not scared for critic. All my friends say my idea sucks !