IdentityUnknown

In my opinion it could've been better. Shifting POV is perfectly fine, but I prefer it remain from a third person perspective when doing it, makes it easier to understand. I wouldn't have minded extra details as well. It seemed to leap into the story a little too quickly with the AiCon stuff, it seemed that we're talking about the antidote and Ai's feelings, and we suddenly discover Shinichi has feelings for Ai...I prefer AiCon stories where Conan gradually realizes that he is in love with Ai, much more realistic. Now, if Gosho Aoyama had hinted that Conan had obvious feelings for Ai that went beyond friendship, it might make sense, but since this has not been shown to such an extent that can be said that Conan truly likes Ai over Ran, this fanfic seemed a little rushed. In Chapter 2, Shinichi felt extremely OOC over Shiho's clothing. Ok, so she looks beautiful. That doesn't mean Shinichi goes and says, "You're going to wear that from now on." Way too commanding, making me feel extremely disappointed in him and dislike him for that. I haven't gotten much farther, and since I'm not supposed to be critiquing the fic here, I shall leave it at that. Though I really wish that the author would choose whether or not to use honorifics...the switching back and forth does irk me a little... Either way, it isn't the best work I've read. Perhaps when I'm through I'll review the story and say a little about it.

I personally like Suzaku's character. <3 ...And once again, I am like no character (I've seen so far) in CG.

I never noticed your quits. But you did say it at one time or another.

Thanks.

Like, like, after you came months ago. :V I asked her if she lived in NJ and she said no, she lived in NH. ...Wait. When was that? *is considering it might've been in MM* :V

他只会读一点，不会说。 我们开始说英文是因为...英文比较简单。

I haven't! D: She mentioned it! D: So? D: It's just a matter of me paying attention when she briefly mentioned it somewhere months ago! D:

None of you knew that before? I guess my stalking skills are still the best.

Dear Anonymous, You wait three days to download a file. ~ Anonymous

I actually have no particular love for the number 7. The thing it's got going is that it's near the middle of 5 and 10. 5 was a little short in this case and 10 a little too long, so 7 it is.

Dear Anonymous, You're kidding me. ~ Anonymous

"Passengers, please remain calm as the security guards help open the doors." IdentityUnknown sighed. Adjusting her cap, she took out her iTouch and fiddled with it. She really did have the worst luck on trips. 7 minutes later, IdentityUnknown saw people starting to get out of the train. Most looked disgruntled, though a few seemed to have collected themselves and moved off. IdentityUnknown, seeing the number of people clambering for a spot, decided to wait. She wasn't in a rush (after all, she was just heading back to the hotel) so she might as well wait for some of the crowd to disperse. "Tsukiko? I haven't heard from you in ages!" IdentityUnknown froze. She really did have the worst luck, didn't she?

:V Only the second? :V ------ IdentityUnknown felt like crap. ...That was being polite. She winced slightly and cracked open her eyes. The sun was setting. ...Wonderful. IdentityUnknown got to her feet and dusted herself up. She had a massive headache and she winced slightly, remembering the last bits of conversation she had heard before she'd been knocked out. "My, my. What is this, now?" "You...you...you're dead! No one else can resist my techniques! Just look at them!" "Ah...you. Well, maybe I was dead for a while. But I like being alive. It feels better." He walks over to Morpheus, and swings with his bat. Like magic, Morpheus disappears. "Well, you could've at least released your technique on them! God." "Well, this is the only way to escape his technique. Besides him cancelling it on his own, which never happens." And then he disappeared...she thought. The words "as usual" came to mind, but she brushed them away. She was the first one up so she went to shake all of the members awake. KKLT took a little while to awake, Misaki a little longer, but Monsi simply wouldn't wake up. The other members crowded around him. "What happened?" KKLT whispered urgently to IdentityUnknown. "All I remember was looking at that guy...and blacking out." IdentityUnknown swallowed. "I'll tell you all later, but let's get Monsi somewhere safe first. He got the worst of it." KKLT nodded. ------ :V

That's...pretty darn amazing considering you drew it with a mouse. And Suzaku is awesome.

Code Geass...is actually a really good anime/manga. I think I will be quite busy from now on. :V

Who knows? It might be the SSAT, or the ISEE, or the PSAT, or some random, little-known test. :V