*reads* *rereads* *rereads* *rereads*
...Wait, who was threatened here? And the threat would've been more effective if she had stated exactly what...yeah, my editor's brain should shut up now.
... :V
*saves anyways* :V And it would've sounded ten times more epic if you added "after all..." at the end. :V Just a suggestion.
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"Aeyra! Misaki! Chelsea!" IdentityUnknown cried.
"Jean, go! We can't go back for them!" Mark urged.
She knew he was right. But...how could she? If they weren't killed, at the very least they'd be threatened for information and used. And she hadn't liked the sound of what the fake IdentityUnknown had been saying...
"Jean, must I knock you out to make you come with me?" Mark said, exasperated. "C'mon!"
IdentityUnknown gritted her teeth, turned, and started running towards the van. Lia, Monsi, Tsukiko, Sayomi, and Wildheart (I'm gonna pencil you in here, still not quite sure exactly where you are) were seated in the van. IdentityUnknown jumped on, then turned towards Mark. "You coming?"
His gaze shifted away. "No. I have other business to attend to." IdentityUnknown nodded, then slammed the door shut.
She still regretted leaving.
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Just setting the stage...