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Posts posted by Kiel95
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i agree with akakata but you're doing great
I'm Kiel95 on dA :3
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this place doesn't seem colorful enough....
LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE
LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE
isn't it just rainbowtastic?
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LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE
(i think you get the point xD +1 rep <3)
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hey~ i love that it's shinshi and i'll continue to read as you post, but it might be best if i don't critique as much as i want to...
As previously stated, it was quite fast paced, and too much so at that. it was hard to understand exactly what was going on when.
also the grammar needs quite a bit of touch-up~ i usually try not to be too picky with grammar, but the sentences are laden with problems and it makes it hard on the brain when looking for a leisure read...
there's a saying "Keep it short and sweet" usually i can agree with that when it comes to writing small parts out... but i believe it was a bit too short, but not necessarily sweet (don't ask for my definition of sweet for this phrase, it's too hard to define...)
well, good luck, and i'll continue reading
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Good Evening all
Hey. What's up?
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because some people won't like the topic... yeah, this is YURI... BUT, THIS IS NOT EXPLICIT IN ANY WAY! IF YOU HAVE THAT MUCH OF A PROBLEM WITH YURI PRETEND THEY'RE BEST FRIENDS OR SOMETHING ^^; JUST DON'T HATE ON IT CUZ IT'S YURI~ anyways enjoy
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well... so yeah...
*WARNING* THE ABOVE PHOTO IS YAOI, IT'S MINOR YAOI, BUT YAOI NONETHELESS, LOOK AT YOUR OWN RISK!
i don't know why, but i really wanted to write that
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ah, now I know how to identify. thank you Kiel!
no problem
Thankfully I'm not a complete dummy when it comes to English (although I must say that it's not my best subject even if it is my first language xD)
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Downfall of the Syndicate Chapter 18
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thanks everyone!!! it's been so long since i read comments it's nice to know that people actually still ready it xD
i'm used to my stories soon disappearing into the abyss of the stories section so i thought they wouldn't be read again ^^; i mean, i remember when there was only one page to the story section... i think i was the one who pushed it to the second with my Downfall Of The Syndicate chapters xD
anyways everyone, THANK YOU!!!