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    I need to wake up at nine or it's suspicious so I don't stay up that late.

    oh... i don't have a set wake up time xD i just wake up whenever i feel like it... no school yet... and sides, if i have a good dream and wake up.. i can go back to sleep and usually it continues xD

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    Im here! *is tired* Hmm... Interesting, but I don't think Ran would act so openly jealous. It'd be more internal than external if you know what I mean. Sonoko would be more likely to suggest the relationship possibility, or possibly suggest 'you've got competition!' to Ran. Ai's quite the ice queen, isn't she? XD (I prefer the name Haibara Ai over Miyano Shiho... It looks prettier in Chinese and English.) I'm curious about where she's staying as well...

    It is kind of hard to say how Ran would react when others are around... whenever we see her jealousy, it's always with only the main characters... they never show her openly jealous at school... so it's kind of hard to say how she'd react... but i never stay in character the whole way through... usually i always have her OOC just to fit xD and don't worry~ you'll find out where she's staying ^^

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    I'd say I'll look tomorrow, but it's past midnight. :mellow: I do most of my writing after midnight... And I like to write long. 2,000 minimum and no real maximum. I'm not too good with controlling length though. Whatever comes out comes out, and that's that really. My DraMione fic is past 14,000 words and I'm a quarter of the way through Chapter 5. :3 I've been up the past Tao hours writing on my itouch.

    hehe, you're like me, writing at night xD that's what i do :) i just stay up until i'm practically falling asleep with my iphone in hand xD i know it's time to stop when my iphone plays ninja and slips out of my hand and attacks my face ;)

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    Umm... You're saying you hate ShinRan (specifically the Ran part) because you believe there are better women than Ran and Shiho is better for Shinichi. And then... I lost it. What are you trying to say here? I get the gist, but the details are blurry. :(

    Ran the magic unicorn. LOL I wonder if there are any MLP fanart crossovers for her... I'd love to see one right now... And Shinichi, and Heiji, and Kaito, and don't forget Hakuba. They'd all look great as little ponies. >:D

    Oh, and obviously I still stick by ShinRan. If it makes the two involved happy, then that's all it needs. The pain between them will be understood, and it will be healed. They know each other better than almost anybody else, and despite the distance, whether it's the tinny greetings through the phone or those precious, short moments they manage to grasp together, the unspoken love they share is still well and alive, burning even hotter with their separation. Neither is truly whole when the other is missing, and Shinichi truly regrets not being able to tell Ran. You can see it in the flashes of sadness that spark in his dark blue eyes, and the quiet moments when he wallows in his guilt, wishing he could answer Ran's wishes for him to simply return. To come home. *sighs* I love how beautiful this love sounds and how simple, easy, and perfect it feels to me. Most of the time I hate canon (too boring. XP Most of the time I only like one true pairing a story... Sometimes not even) but I love this couple. It's my favorite canon couple. *nods*

    *shakes head slowly* RAN IS A MAGICAL UNICORN THAT FARTS RAINBOWS xD she needs help... that horn might make her be hunted xD UNICORN HUNTING SEASON! AICON/SHINSHI'S GET OUT YOUR HUNTIN RIFLES... let the fun begin ;)

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    Hmmmm... Then it's a reasonably short story I guess. But you'll probably be adding lots of detail, ne? How many parts are there going to be. *paws* I'm curious. :)

    i have no clue xD i dont want to make it so there's too much to read on one page, so i just cut it at a point that seems ok and slap the next section up xD i have part 3 up~

    it still seems somewhat slow, but i want this to be an easy story to read, where each section is short enough so that you can get through it quickly, but not too short that you read it in a few seconds and your done... (sounds weird i know... if you want, also blame the fact that when i wrote the first half of the story it was about 3 AM in the morning xD)

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    The two girls nodded.

    “I was working on a case and Miyano-sempai was helping me.”

    “What sort of relationship was it, hmm Shinichi?” Ran asked with a terrifyingly angry smile.

    “She was just my partner,” he said hurriedly as his heartbeat sped up.

    He didn’t want to be cornered with an angry Ran blocking his path to freedom. “We worked together and that’s all! She likes to make fun of me and twist everything around just to mess with everyone’s mind. There really is nothing between us!”

    They seemed quite skeptical about it but slowly began to believe him. His eyes didn’t betray him, he was telling the truth.

    “Oh my, you already told them? And here I was hoping to mess with you a little more. It’s much more interesting when you’re flustered, your mind doesn’t seem to work as fast.” Shiho was standing at the door with a smirk before turning and walking off. ~Kiel95

    Shinichi suddenly stood up which made the girls jump slightly in surprise, and in that moment of hesitation he managed to escape, running after Shin=ho and saying, “Oi, Miyano-sempai! Get back here you jerk! Stop making misunderstandings!!”

    The others just watched with open mouths as they left.

    Shinichi caught up with Shiho who didn’t stop. She turned slightly while walking and had a slight smile on her face.

    He didn’t understand why, but he knew he shouldn’t stop following her. She always seemed to exude an aura that told him what he should do next, he figured it was finally time he obeyed it.

    They ended up on the rooftop after a little more walking.

    When they arrived, Shinichi asked in exasperation, “Oi, Haibara, what are we doing up here?!”

    She whipped around in a sudden movement and glared, saying with an ice cold tone, “I’m Miyano Shiho now. Haibara Ai no longer exists. Don’t use the incorrect name here. It could cause devastating trouble.”

    Shinichi lost his angry tone as he worked the fact that the person in front of him was Miyano-sempai and not the child he’d known before, and he should address her as such, into his brain.

    “Now then,” Shiho said in a slightly lighter tone, “I’m quite sure you wanted to talk with me but can’t do so in front of other students. So, what is it you want?”

    He gulped slightly, though he didn’t know why, and asked, “Why are you here specifically?”

    “I told you, to make sure that the antidote is permanent.”

    “But why school?”

    Shiho sighed and said with a slight longing in her voice, “Maybe you don’t know what it’s like, but this is normal high school. Everyone’s my age. It’s not what I’m used to. I’m no longer the youngest in my grade where everyone looks at me like I’m a freak since I’m a genius at such a young age. I can live a normal high school life. You’ve always lived one so you don’t know what I mean. I was often moving up the grade system at an extremely fast rate. I never had the chance to meet people before I was moved to the next grade. It was only slightly different in college. Even thought I attended college in the normal amount of time it takes, well, shaving a year or two off, I was constantly surrounded by the syndicate to watch over me as I grew smarter and more valuable to them. They couldn’t have me harmed or have me escape. That’s why I’ve never lived normally, so just this once, just once I want to see what it’s like.

    She slowly went silent and Shinichi was at a loss for words. ~Kiel95

    She then turned and leaned against the railing with a smile and continued, “Well whatever right? No point dwelling on the past if it’s unimportant. I’m here now so it’s fine. I’m starting to receive the experience I wanted, though the constant love letters can be annoying. Ah, and I had a question for you. Confessions, love letters, are these normal for high school students?”

    Shinichi snapped out of his melancholy mood and replied with a slight smile, “Not to normal students, but for you and me, it happens quite often. I must admit, on a scale of 1 to 10, ten being the hottest; you’d rank an 11 which is why so many guys are after you.”

    Shiho walked over and brought her face close to his asking, “Oh? Might you be one of them?”

    He stumbled back slightly and regained his composure quickly and rolled his eyes saying, “Baaaaaaka, of course not. I have Ran remember?”

    Shiho pretended to be thinking as she said, “Oh yeah, how could I ever forget?” Her sarcasm was quite apparent.

    He was about to retort when she smirked and brushed past him, “See you around Kudo-kun, and don’t forget to eat your lunch.”

    He turned around to reply but she had already disappeared down the steps.

    He sighed in exasperation and headed down the steps as well, going back to the classroom to eat.

    When that day was over, Shinichi headed home in exhaustion. It’d been quite the crazy day, and he hadn’t been expecting any of it. He was glad though, glad that everything seemed to calm back down.

    Shiho didn’t bother him again, the gossiping died down, and Ran was content that Shinichi was hers, even if they weren’t dating yet. Even so, something just didn’t feel right to Shinichi.

    Two months had passed and he’d only caught glimpses of Shiho in the halls. She’d be surrounded by girls who were her new friends, and guys who were still pining after her. ~Kiel95

    Not once since the first day they’d seen each other had she come seeking him out. In fact, he was actually feeling a bit lonely, it was strange.

    He also couldn’t visit her outside school since she no longer stayed at the professor’s, nor had she told him where she now resided.

    So for the moment, he ignored those thoughts. Little did he know he was about to be dragged back into her world again, but this time, he was the one initiating it.

    ~Kiel95

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    I think the conversation would be important to Sonoko at the very least. *imagines Sonoko inching forward to eavesdrop* I bet the whole school knows about the talk by that point. *rolls eyes* And I think Ran would notice some resemblance between Ai and Shiho... Perhaps in the next chapter she should mention how much Shiho resembles 'that little Haibara girl'.

    nope~ sorry xD it's not gonna go that way xD

    besides, since the two weren't whispering there's no point in eavesdropping :) and even tho she says experiment that'll never lead to anything... and even though Ran would notice some resemblence between the two... do you think she'd just come out and say something like that? and she wouldn't say 'that little Haibara girl' she would say, 'She resembles Ai-chan'~~~ i just don't feel like making it too complicated cuz then i have to add in more xD i think the story is fiiiiiiine, so i'm just gonna tweak it tiny bits not change the whole story O_e

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    Interesting! Though even I would say he'd overreact way more if she went missing... After a conversation about the Organization a mere few days prior, he'd definitely be on edge. I find it surprising they didn't collide in those two days. It'd be more interesting if it was 'It's only been a few hours, and she's already rejected ten separate confessions!' XD It'd add more humor to it as well. :) Oh, BTW they were whispering when she mentioned 'Experiment', right? It'd sound quite strange otherwise... The formatting was good this time. Easier on my eyes.

    no, i don't believe she whispered 'experiment' but since the way she said it gave no real indication as to what the experiment was it would only confuse the others :) Of course they didn't really car about their conversation, it was more that they knew each other that bugged them xD

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    You can just send the stuff from your iTouch to your computer. That's what I do. I just typed up a three thousand word chapter of my DraMione story last night on it. ;D All I need to do is some minor editing and italicizes.

    my problem is that i always want to make changes to my story, but when i send it, i just can't change it on my iphone... its like i need to retype it to make it the way i want... so i always retype xD if i'm worried i'll lose it i send it to myself in an email... but i never use the sent version, i always retype

    (also, part two is up)

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    I personally don't like Shiho much in looks... She's a little too similar to her younger self, and the hair style seems a bit strange when she's older. I think she's very pretty when she's little though because it suits her more when she's mini. XD I have the strangest views....

    are you waiting for me to hurt you? she's hot! i think the hairstyle actually fits her better when she's older xD of course no one ever really keeps the same hairstyle from childhood to adulthood (but in anime they do xD) but i think shiho looks god with the short cut, and she looks very prettiful ;)

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    Oh, I saw that picture too! Though I don't think I favourited it... I usually just favorite drawings I like even if I disagree with the pairing... ... ... Your story is interesting, but the format is kind of hard to read. I couldn't distinguish easily between one paragraph and the next. For some reason, this story seems slower than the others you usually write. Less... action I might say. I dunno. I'll be reading, even if I'm not a ConAi. (I'm not as ferociously ShinRan anymore simply because my fandom's shifted to DraMione, so I don't mind ConAi/ShinShi.)

    i'll put indents to make it easier xD and it seems slower cuz it's only the introduction xD its all typed up on my ipod in one long story... but i really didn't feel like typing it all up at once... so i just decided to go with that :3

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    Two weeks passed and Ai suddenly disappeared. No one came for her. No one heard from her. She was just… gone. Nobody knew what’d happened.

    Shinichi began to wonder if she’d gotten tired of them and left, or maybe, maybe THEY were still out there.

    He was immediately on full alert and much more cautious than usual. The last conversation he’d had with her had him slightly on edge but prepared just in case some of them were still out there.

    A few days after her disappearance he received a letter in the mail. It didn’t have anything on it but his address and postage. No return address. ~Kiel95

    He questioningly opened the letter and read it carefully, eyes growing wide as he did so.

    “Hey Kudo-kun. Sorry I had to disappear so suddenly on you guys. Something came up and I had to leave for a while. Don’t worry because I’m fine. I’ll get in touch soon. So calm down a bit. I know you’re most likely worried and becoming overcautious. Yes, it’s good to stay cautious, but don’t become like me, paranoid as I was. That’s plainly a bad idea as you’ll become an introvert like me. Anyways, I’ll contact you soon – Haibara Ai.”

    He let out a sigh of relief. She was safe. That took a huge amount of tension off his shoulders.

    He placed the letter down on his nightstand and was able to rest easy and drift off to sleep without worry.

    The next day he woke up with a smile and prepared for school. He met up with Ran as usual and the two smiled and talked on the way to school, their hands brushing up against each other but neither saying anything nor stopping it.

    As they entered the school grounds they were treated like a couple, but something was amiss that morning.

    People were whispering and gossiping about something new and weren’t paying as much attention to the high school detective and his childhood friend.

    Curious as to what it could be, he joined a group of friends and asked, “Hey guys, what’s up?”

    “You mean you didn’t hear?” someone asked in shock.

    “Of course he didn’t hear,” another guy interjected, “He has no reason to care since he has Mouri Ran!”

    A light blush painted his cheeks until someone else said, “Anyway… Dude… there’s this new third year who transferred in. She’s a real beauty and she’s smart to top it off! I hear it’s only her second day and ten guys have confessed and been rejected already! She’s already being called the ice queen since she does it so emotionlessly! I really want to see what she looks like, but I still haven’t gotten the chance!”

    The others agreed and Shinichi just shrugged it off. Didn’t mean anything to him. He didn’t care for rumors and gossip. He was more of a hard fact guy. What they were spreading had nothing to do with him.

    He slipped out of the group and told Ran the gist of things, who was just happy he didn’t’ have an interest in seeing their supposedly beautiful sempai. ~Kiel95

    They headed off to class where they were greeted by Sonoko. Of course they were teased, but it ended sooner than normal since the topic was soon changed to the sempai they’d just heard about.

    Sonoko suddenly stopped the flow of the conversation going on in the classroom by suddenly saying loudly, “I forgot!”

    Her classmates looked at her quizzically.

    Sonoko pointed an accusing finger at Shinichi and said, “The new sempai also mentioned Shinichi-kun!”

    All eyes immediately turned to glare at him.

    He was just as shocked as them and he hurriedly said in his defense, “Oi, Oi! I’ve never even met this sempai you’re talking about! Much less do I even know what she looks like or why she mentioned me!”

    Suddenly a cutting voice said from the doorway in a seemingly suggestive tone, “Is that so Kudo-kun? And I thought we were closer, much closer, than that.”

    They spun around in surprise and Shinichi’s eyes widened. “H-H-,” he cut himself off right before saying Haibara and correcting himself saying, “M-Miyano-san?!”

    She smirked and said with an overly sarcastic tone, “Kudo-kun, I believe it’s Miyano-sempai to you.”

    He seemed flabbergasted and his mouth moved but no words came out.

    Shiho slowly walked into the room and stood before Shinichi with a cool gaze. Then she leaned towards him and said with a childishly mischievous smile, “Oh, you seem to be quite at a loss for words. I must say you never would’ve believed I was here unless I came to see you myself would you?” She giggled and said, “You needing to call me ‘Sempai’ after all we’ve been through must be quite a shock no?”

    Shinichi was finally able to shut his mouth and regain his composure, and once he’d done so he spoke as calmly as possible, “What are you even doing here, Miyano-SEMPAI?” he stressed ‘Sempai’ and had to grit his teeth through saying it. ~Kiel95

    “Oh, nothing short of trying to learn a few new things,” she said with a teasing smirk.

    “You’ve graduated college in America, what could you possibly wish to learn here?!?”

    She shrugged and moved towards the window and stared up at the sky a bit before responding in a distant manner, “I figured I’d see if there was something I’d missed in school that I can learn here. Besides, I was never able to learn Japanese culture first hand in America. Also, I need to oversee my… Experiment, to make sure it’s permanent. What better way than to go to school?”

    Shinichi’s eye twitched.

    Without looking at him Shiho said with an annoyed sigh, as if playing with him had become a hassle, “Cool off Kudo-kun, it’s not like we’ll be in the same class. I just stopped by to say hello to let you know I’m doing fine.” Then she slowly turned and headed for the door saying just as she left, “See you around Kudo-kun, and don’t mind me. We don’t have to talk now that we’ve finished this conversation. It’s about time class starts and I really must get back.”

    She left before he could retaliate. Within moments he was crowded by his classmates, all asking him thousands of questions at once. He couldn’t answer a single one since they were speaking altogether and much too fast.

    When the bell rang and the teacher entered, the others calmed down and went back to their seats, still stealing glances and glares at Shinichi whenever they had the chance.

    When lunch came around, Shinichi stretched a bit before getting up, but before he stood, Sonoko and Ran stood above him with twitching expressions. They wore smiles, but it was quite obvious how angry they were.

    He pulled back slightly but had nowhere to go since he was seated against a window.

    “Explain,” Sonoko and Ran said in sync in a simple yet stern and angered tone.

    It was obvious that everyone else was waiting for an answer as well and weren’t leaving until they heard.

    Shinichi muttered, “Shit,” under his breath. He then inhaled deeply and calmed himself down before starting, “Remember when I was on that really long case where I had to leave school?”

    ~Kiel95

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