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Kiel95

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    thanks everyone!!! it's been so long since i read comments it's nice to know that people actually still ready it xD

    i'm used to my stories soon disappearing into the abyss of the stories section so i thought they wouldn't be read again ^^; i mean, i remember when there was only one page to the story section... i think i was the one who pushed it to the second with my Downfall Of The Syndicate chapters xD

    anyways everyone, THANK YOU!!!

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    hey~ i love that it's shinshi :D and i'll continue to read as you post, but it might be best if i don't critique as much as i want to...

    As previously stated, it was quite fast paced, and too much so at that. it was hard to understand exactly what was going on when.

    also the grammar needs quite a bit of touch-up~ i usually try not to be too picky with grammar, but the sentences are laden with problems and it makes it hard on the brain when looking for a leisure read...

    there's a saying "Keep it short and sweet" usually i can agree with that when it comes to writing small parts out... but i believe it was a bit too short, but not necessarily sweet (don't ask for my definition of sweet for this phrase, it's too hard to define...)

    well, good luck, and i'll continue reading :)

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    Ack! The pic made me blush. :P It always makes me blush when ppl kiss.

    But nice job! I like it :) +Rep

    yay thank you <3 <3 <3

    i know what you mean, the blushing part... but i only seem to blush when it's in real life or in a manga and it's a surprise xD

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