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HalfAngel

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  1. 4e5dd44a.gifThanks for the awesome story, Kiel! It was a pretty good idea to make it a play for the Shinshi story. I love your stories and I hope to see more of them in the future!015.gif

    Though it would be more romantic if you made it this way:

    Ran gives her chocolate to Shinichi (at school).

    Shinichi walks home, and was about to eat the chocolate when a dog snatches it away from him and eats it.

    Shinichi greatly dissapointed walks home as to see Shiho standing infront of his house gate.

    She hesitantly gives him a chocolate she had made in the lab, an experiment chocolate.

    How cruel... The poor dog will die of food poisoningd582d79f.gif


  2. - I like playing football

    - I prefer play/playing/to play(?) football

    I would have to say I prefer Playing Football. I prefer to play football doesnt sound right to me.

    They are both grammatically correct. rolleyes.gif

    You would use the word 'prefer' if you're comparing it to something else.

    Example A

    Person A: I like playing tennis.

    Person B: I prefer playing football.

    Example B

    I like playing tennis, but I prefer playing football.


  3. ... Geez. So this whole time, I've been trying to find an answer to a question that was wrong?3c68bb64.gif

    Well anyway, my answer is that you put the two lines on top of the word 'hole' so it looks like a roof. There we go~ A building!

    post-3661-12967058307515_thumb.jpg

    th_053_XD.gifOkay, so it's probably wrong, but anyway...


  4. Yay~ That was an awesome chapter. The very last sentence was a great one and left me feeling satisfied, even if I'd prefer Ran to be with Shinichi.

    I kept forgetting which line I was up to since it kinda looks like it's two big paragraphs (so maybe the fact that my sibling being very annoying was part of the problem, but anyway...)

    It was a great ending to an awesome story 088.gif

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