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You aren't moving from that idea are you?

Well you have been sticking to your I'm immortal idea...

Sorry just kidding.

I need help mostly in paragraphing and word use.

Be so imposable that's what.

Yes please Rin-sama!

Why must you be like like that Kid?

I do my best, but all my life I have had bad grammar and spelling.

Only a human would try to act like they can't die and you keep saying you can't die.

I'm still fixing the first on Rin-chan but I almost done.

Yeah you can't eat everything and

YOU ARE HUMAN!!!

Yeah round two well go better.

And Kid

yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Okay lets retreat...for now.

Maybe...so what happens to the plan?

What happen to Cindy?

I'm with Rin-chan, you might be a phantom theft but they are human as well.

opps I ment Rin-chan.

The plan sounds good, but I think the long range should come first Cindy.

Lets see we'll some ammo for the guns, a sharper for the knives and a fridge for the yogurt. Did I leave anything out?

Oh no not the yogurt!!

Need any help?

Oh and why do you wish harm to Kid?

Okay I'll go through it again when I'm done fixing Kid Kloak.

Thank goodness I think I'm finely getting the of it. What you doing?

Rin-chan I made changes to the story.

Please see if I did it right.