User talk:Tuan
Some editing recommendations (and welcome to our wiki!)
Hello Tuan, and welcome to our (currently small) team of contributors! I saw your edits to Episode 1161: The Secret's Afterimage and I've found a few things that you could improve on.
The first is putting spoilers in spoiler boxes. Your resolution (shown below) reveals a major event of this episode that will make readers lose they're interest in watching the episode after reading the resolution, hence, a "spoiler."
The woman going with inspector Sawatari is Wani's girlfriends while Wani is also Sawatari's senpai, however, Wani has sacrificed in the event of the one-eyed flashback. Sawatari felt himself owning his senpai a lot, so he tried to help the woman to take what is destined to be her but currently not to due to his boyfriend's death, but he can't do that on his own due to the shop policy, so he ask her for help so the gift from Wani can be given to her. In the end, Megure decided to overlook this while him, Mori, Sawatari and Want's girlfriend burst into tear in memory of Wani
You can hide spoilers in spoiler box by putting the text in between <spoiler> and </spoiler> like this:
<spoiler>The woman going with inspector Sawatari is Wani's girlfriends while Wani is also Sawatari's senpai, however, Wani has sacrificed in the event of the one-eyed flashback. Sawatari felt himself owning his senpai a lot, so he tried to help the woman to take what is destined to be her but currently not to due to his boyfriend's death, but he can't do that on his own due to the shop policy, so he ask her for help so the gift from Wani can be given to her. In the end, Megure decided to overlook this while him, Mori, Sawatari and Want's girlfriend burst into tear in memory of Wani</spoiler>
Which gives you this (click on the Show spoilers link to read the hidden text):
A second thing I'd like to note, and may need more effort to work on, is grammar and spelling issues. While it is not always possible to be 100% writing error-free the first time around, using software like Google Docs and Microsoft Word can help point out these errors. Rereading your writing will also help in finding these errors. A wiki with lots of writing errors is considered low-quality and readers will stay away from those sites, but as contributors of this wiki, we're on a mission to prevent that and create the best wiki possible.
And with that, I'd like to once again, unofficially, welcome to you that mission. Hope to see the improvement in your edits very soon! --Avico (talk) 20:40, 4 May 2025 (UTC)
