User talk:Cammy3131: Difference between revisions

Latest revision as of 02:17, 14 May 2011

Sorry, my beta-brain self-activated. :P --IdentityUnknown

[EDIT] You took it out completely so I guess you either read this or decided it didn't fit. Anyways, I'm gonna take out what I said before.

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-Hey, Cammy, I edited a few mistakes and added Main Article links. But question, one of your sentences in the Relationship Analysis (for Mohorovicic) doesn't make sense. It's this one:
+Sorry, my beta-brain self-activated. :P --[[User:Tonsostuff|IdentityUnknown]]
-''It is considered that Cammy3131 might have feelings for Mohorovicic being his rival, but this is yet to be proven or thought of.''
+[EDIT] You took it out completely so I guess you either read this or decided it didn't fit. Anyways, I'm gonna take out what I said before.
-Okay, Cammy, prepare for the beta-version of IdentityUnknown:
-The sentence doesn't flow properly (at least what's before the comma). You might want to change it to "Being Mohorovicic's rival, it is considered that Cammy3131 may have feelings for him" or something like that.
-Sorry, my beta-brain self-activated. :P --[[User:Tonsostuff|IdentityUnknown]]