Darkest does art

[darkest absol]

Just as the title says. I do art.

The shoulders and face kind of feel off. Any input would be great!

[snowflake]

-for the shoulders, what you could have done was moved the one on the left more to the right, that way it looks less like she's jerking it back or something.

-for the face, I think starting the jaw higher up would have made her face smaller and more proportional. Also maybe move her eyes farther apart from each other and have the one on the right's tips with an edge rather than a straight line, maybe?

I like the expression on her face, though.

[Nourov]

Is this your first draw? well done

You will need next time to draw the face more smaller so the eyes, nose and mouth become more closer..

And there's no problem in the shoulders, one is higher than the other but it looks good :3

Very excited to see your next draw, good luck ~