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Hejle

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  1. Den er færdi, men en ven er ved at rette den... :D

  2. Yo *high five :D

    Læs min historie ASAP... Fortsættelsen kommer i aften... :D

  3. I love you more than you love me.... :D

  4. if i said how i guessed it, you would not believe me... :D

  5. Are you bored Kid the Phantom Thief??? ;D

  6. I am close to cry, because of this... I wish you well IU/Pyre/Jean. I hope you will continue to read my story... Maybe comment it. Since you are going to become an author, your comment mean alot. May good fortune rule over you May peace live in your heart And the stars watch over you.
  7. You might enter the story later. Since it is unfinished Horovimocic is a person from this DCW - though it is not his name. Also the mysteriuous woman. It is someone from DCW, but the person i have in mine don't use that line. Crazy..
  8. please read my story:

  9. Why not making a "About me"???

  10. Note - this is a story about persons from this forum. The only person from the Manga/Anime is Edogawa Conan. It is unfinished, and i want to hear what you think about it. If most people like it, I will finish it, if not, it will end like this. There will be more people from the forum, but if you want to participate in the story, write it to me. Notice, i would also like a special thing about you. For example: Hano good at remembering something or running around... Note: Balthazar checked it for gramar mistakes... But here is the beginnig of the story: _____________________________________________________________________________________________ A car drove through the night. It was a white Porsche (356A). Inside the car were two men. Their codename are Cola and Fanta. They were searching. Searching for someone. The siren from the police could be heard in the morning. I woke up. My name is Hano. I just recently moved into this apartment. It was placed in Beika city, in Tokyo. It was a known part of the city with most crimes. There were three murders in the first week. It is now Monday morning in the second week. Since I don’t have a job yet, I decide to see what happened. I followed the sound of the police cars and end up in a big messy apartment. It belonged to reaper. Or was owned by him. It seems he was murdered. Reaper was known in this area, mainly because he was extremely insane. Even I have heard about him. He was in fact Saviors brother. In the room were a bunch of people. Detective Kudo was all around the body. I knew him, Detective Kudo that is. I’ve met him on a excellent manga fan site. He told the police that Reaper was murdered 3 hours ago. The police inspector, named Forever Lost, called to her men that they should look after suspects. She was named Forever Lost, because she was literally lost on her cases. She could not find the criminal. At home she had a man – or so were the rumors. Because every time she was asked about it she replied something like this: “I do not have a man because I live alone” or something like that. I walked in, and greeted them hello. “Hello Forever Lost, another case?” I asked. “Yes, a murder case,” she replied, and tried to continue. “The victim was stabbed in his back by a 9 cm knife,” interrupted Detective Kudo. I stood and watched the police doing their work, when a little kid with a red bowtie came in. I tried to stop him, but he forced his way in, and observed the murder scene. After a few minutes, without anything happening, was Forever Lost’s men back. “We are sorry Inspector, but there is nobody with a motive out there. And they all got an alibi. Should we try to confirm them?” one of the men said. “No, there is no need to confirm the alibi. After all, this was a random murder case. It means the murder did not know the deceased,” answered Forever Lost. “But how did the murderer came in then,” I asked suddenly and continued, “There is no sign of the doors or windows being forced open.” “I believe that the murder knew the deceased,” Detective Kudo answered my question. “Wrong, shouted Edogawa Conan, ”there is a sign that the door was opened with a fake key. If you look closely you will be able to see parts of plaster. Also notice the visit card here. It was probably dropped by the criminal.” We all looked at him with suspicious eyes while Conan tried to explain that he heard it on television. We looked at the visit card. The Following information was written on it. I wrote it down In my notebook. It said: Horovimocic Haido City Tokyo We looked up the name on the pc using a website known as www.krak.dk (a website to find other addresses). Unfortunately nothing came up. We all looked surprised, when someone shouted. “Get your asses out from there. There is a bomb in the apartment,” someone shouted. We all got out unharmed, when the apartment blew up. It seems it was a time bomb. The one shouting was a woman wearing a blue jacket whit a hood over the hair, a scarf around the face and sunglasses. It was impossible to indentify her. Even her shoes were altered with making it hard to decide her height. “Who are you,” I asked her? “A secret makes a woman, woman,” answered the mysterious woman, as she disappeared. We decide to continue the meeting at my apartment, since it was near the murder scene. When we arrived we saw Cammy3131 walking towards us.
  11. I watched Death note, and decide i needed another Mystery-manga. Then i found DC and could not stop wathing it. (It was better than Death note)
  12. Happy Birthday Edogawa Conan/Kudo Shinichi

    1. Balthazar Manfredie

      Balthazar Manfredie

      Have to change this

      The B day is over

  13. Math Test today. OMG, Can't wait till i get the results

    1. Balthazar Manfredie

      Balthazar Manfredie

      it seems that EdiblePencil is writhing a story too

      Is that a competition

    2. Hejle

      Hejle

      don't think so... Just two similar ideas at the same time

    3. Balthazar Manfredie

      Balthazar Manfredie

      Your story has some gram mistakes. You may better check it with some one

      You cant say their codenames was that and that, you say their codenames are that

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  14. Vikinger - cool... Hvis du har brug for hjælp med skolearbejde, bare skriv til mig... Skal på HTX næste år.

  15. Now i finaly got a signature to... I AM ExTrEmLy happy...
  16. @phantomlady1101

    DK also stands for the country Denmark...

  17. In english: A lot of word i dont want to waste time translating*

  18. Godt... Tror jeg... Skrev en krimi som stil. Det er dog den første krimi jeg har skrevet så ved ikke hvor god den var... Hvordan går det for dig??? (In english: A lot of words i do not wont to bother translate...)

  19. My net dissapeared yesterday...

    1. Misaki-chan
    2. Hejle

      Hejle

      yeah... and i just needed to see the ending on a video serie (Conan 581)

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