this is my first fic and i struggle with my grammer. however i have a lot of idas so i am writing as good as i can. please feel free to comment be and give me feed back. the way i have wriiten like the main character get found by another person comes from tsukiko. i am not copying her ideas, it is just the grammer, the way she has written. so you see it is just the grammer.
Porlouge Boom!
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Danm! That wasn’t supposed to happen’’! ‘’I feel so weak I think it’s the end.’’ the only thing i knew is, i fell to the ground and feel how my eyes are closing.
chapter one:
it was dark outside when subaru was walking home. on his way he saw someone lying on the wet ground, . he thought it was odd and crouched down and said '' hey little boy you shoudn't sleep at a place like this. he saw the boy is wearing a louse jacket and jeans. it were teenage clothes. when he didn't get respose he touched the boy . he checked the pulse and said'' thank goodness he is alive. however the boy has many wounds and is bleeding a lot. subaru gasped'' oh my god i have to call an ambulance.''