Uncle Sporkums 123 Report post Posted May 4, 2015 Here's the first chapter. http://drmuttonchops.deviantart.com/art/Detective-Conan-Alternate-Bourbon-Arc-Chapter-1-531035271?ga_submit_new=10%253A1430773403 3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MeiTanteixX 184 Report post Posted May 6, 2015 Here's the first chapter. http://drmuttonchops.deviantart.com/art/Detective-Conan-Alternate-Bourbon-Arc-Chapter-1-531035271?ga_submit_new=10%253A1430773403 As I've said b4...Really good stuff! 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Uncle Sporkums 123 Report post Posted May 6, 2015 And as I have, you're welcome! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Chekhov MacGuffin 1089 Report post Posted May 7, 2015 The pacing was really good. This one has a solid start. 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Uncle Sporkums 123 Report post Posted May 7, 2015 Thanks, Chek! That's very kind of you. I haven't continued working on the next chapter yet, as I ran into a storytelling dead end. I was afraid of a positive comment like that, as I'm not very good at continuing to build suspense and continuing a mystery, (laying clues/having Conan put them together and whatnot). The story actually improved as I wrote, as it originally wasn't supposed to have those three suspect characters. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Uncle Sporkums 123 Report post Posted May 9, 2015 Chapter 2 is now up! A little shorter, but hopefully okay. http://drmuttonchops.deviantart.com/art/Detective-Conan-Alternate-Bourbon-Arc-Chapter-2-531918799 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Uncle Sporkums 123 Report post Posted May 13, 2015 Chapter 3 http://drmuttonchops.deviantart.com/art/Detective-Conan-Alternate-Bourbon-Chapter-3-532886459 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Heliotropic 138 Report post Posted May 14, 2015 Although I did like the Bourbon arc, and I normally don't care much at all for fan-fiction, I think this is really well written. Great job, looking forward to the next one! 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Uncle Sporkums 123 Report post Posted May 14, 2015 Thanks! That's very kind of you to say! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Uncle Sporkums 123 Report post Posted May 16, 2015 Chapter 4 http://drmuttonchops.deviantart.com/art/Detective-Conan-Alternate-Bourbon-Chapter-4-533340657 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Uncle Sporkums 123 Report post Posted May 18, 2015 Chapter 5 http://drmuttonchops.deviantart.com/art/Detective-Conan-Alternate-Bourbon-Chapter-5-533766337?ga_submit_new=10%253A1431918700 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Uncle Sporkums 123 Report post Posted May 28, 2015 Here's chapter 6. I know it may seem really contrived, but this is the best MeitanteixX and I could work with based on what I had. http://drmuttonchops.deviantart.com/art/Detective-Conan-Alternate-Bourbon-Arc-Chapter-6-536007095?ga_submit_new=10%253A1432854516 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Uncle Sporkums 123 Report post Posted May 30, 2015 I'm glad that some of you are enjoying this interpretation so far. I'm already writing the next chapter right now, and I'm already formulating plans for another alternate storyline. Namely, the "Araide Investigates the B.O." Arc that Gosho never got around to. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Uncle Sporkums 123 Report post Posted May 31, 2015 Chapter 7 http://drmuttonchops.deviantart.com/art/Detective-Conan-Alternate-Bourbon-Arc-Chapter-7-536651585?ga_submit_new=10%253A1433107173 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Uncle Sporkums 123 Report post Posted June 20, 2015 Chapter 8. Thanks so much to Chekhov for the story ideas, http://drmuttonchops.deviantart.com/art/Detective-Conan-Alternate-Bourbon-Arc-Chapter-8-540830062?ga_submit_new=10%253A1434776152 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Uncle Sporkums 123 Report post Posted June 21, 2015 Chapter 9 http://drmuttonchops.deviantart.com/art/Detective-Conan-Alternate-Bourbon-Arc-Chapter-9-541172349?ga_submit_new=10%253A1434918100 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Uncle Sporkums 123 Report post Posted July 7, 2015 Chapter 10 is finally out! Thanks so much to DCUniverseAfficianado for the story ideas! http://drmuttonchops.deviantart.com/art/Detective-Conan-Alternate-Bourbon-Arc-Chapter-10-544642278?ga_submit_new=10%253A1436252370 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Uncle Sporkums 123 Report post Posted July 19, 2015 Chapter 11. May be the last one for all I know. http://drmuttonchops.deviantart.com/art/Detective-Conan-Alternate-Bourbon-Arc-Chapter-11-547402518?ga_submit_new=10%253A1437301207 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Heliotropic 138 Report post Posted July 20, 2015 Chapter 11. May be the last one for all I know. http://drmuttonchops.deviantart.com/art/Detective-Conan-Alternate-Bourbon-Arc-Chapter-11-547402518?ga_submit_new=10%253A1437301207 Looking forward to checking it out later. Have really enjoyed the pacing so far! The changes with Masumi have been quite interesting. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Uncle Sporkums 123 Report post Posted August 15, 2015 Giving it another try. Chapter 12 http://drmuttonchops.deviantart.com/art/Detective-Conan-Alternate-Bourbon-Arc-Chapter-12-553845935?ga_submit_new=10%253A1439632093 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Uncle Sporkums 123 Report post Posted August 18, 2015 Okay, I tried. This wasn't worth it, Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Uncle Sporkums 123 Report post Posted November 13, 2015 If you want to re-read these in the future, go to my fanfiction page. I'm deleting my DA page soon. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11228175/1/Alternate-Bourbon-Arc Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DCUniverseAficionado 252 Report post Posted November 13, 2015 And your tumblr page, as well? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Uncle Sporkums 123 Report post Posted November 13, 2015 No. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DCUniverseAficionado 252 Report post Posted November 13, 2015 So all the things that would've just gone on deviantart will now be presented over there? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
