Detective S.H 0 Report post Posted January 1, 2013 One day a big peach was floating down the river. An old lady who just happened to be outside saw the the big peach floating. She thought that since the peach was big,roung and fuzzy it would be tasty. So she took the peach with her and went back home.Her husband saw what she was carrying and said "Ara Ara, Baa-chan where did you get that peach?" She replied " I saw it floating down the river."The husband said "It looks tasty!" She said "It sure does, Lets cut it open." So the husband took a knife and began to cut it very slowly and carefully. Why! Inside there was a cute baby boy. The wife and the husband got suprised."My,isn't that boy so cute?"Said the Wife.The husband said "Let's keep the boy until its peach mama and papa comes." So they both named the boy Conan. Conan started growing into a child but his peach mama and papa never came. The wife and the husband were like mother and father.He made new friends like the talking dog,the monkey and the pheasant. A message was sent from the kingdom.It was written that anyone who would save princess Ayumi would recieve half his gold.But no one excepted the challenge because they knew that a fierce monster held her captive.However Conan was determined to save the princess and get the half of the king's gold because Conan's family were poor.His friends agreed to help on his quest.The journey was not very easy but they made it where the monster lived.They made their way through the dungeon and found princess Ayumi in a cell.When she saw them she said "Thank god you are here!"On their way coming to the dungeon they found a rusted key so they used the key and the cell opened.Conan said " Let's go quickly!"They made their way out barely alive. When they returned to the kingdom the king gave half of his gold as he said and then Conan asked Princess Ayumi to marry him.....and she said YES! The friends were awarded bravely and said their farewells to Conan because they had to leave. They all lived happily ever after. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tengaku squared 291 Report post Posted January 1, 2013 A rule of thumb: No one will bother to read anything if the format is terrible. And a piece of advice: No one will bother continuing to read if the plot is incomprehensible. That is all. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Detective S.H 0 Report post Posted January 2, 2013 A rule of thumb: No one will bother to read anything if the format is terrible. And a piece of advice: No one will bother continuing to read if the plot is incomprehensible. That is all. Well,Thanks for the advice. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Detective S.H 0 Report post Posted January 2, 2013 A rule of thumb: No one will bother to read anything if the format is terrible. And a piece of advice: No one will bother continuing to read if the plot is incomprehensible. That is all. Well,Thanks for the advice. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites