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Her head is a bit "stretched" to the upper right.

And either the nose is a bot "too small" or you rearrange the eyes.

The left eye needs to be a bit more to the left.

In the original, you can see that the eye almost touches the edge of the head.

Also, the nose is between the eyes. If you continue the line of the nose (upper part), in your picture, it would hit the eye XD In the original, it doesn't.

So if you mahe the eye smaller or "push it more to the left", it should be better XD

The right eye needs to be a bit "longer" in the width. Usually, you have 1 eye space inbetween (roughly).

If you compare it with a straight line down to the mouth, the eye in the original would touch the edge of the mouth.

In your pic it's not touching :V

This sounds harsh ^^" I'm sorry D:

But it's nice :D The face, especially in this angle, is hard D: I have problems with it too >.<

it's good!!! but you can still improve!!! keep up!!! :lol:

thank you guys for ur comments! i will try to improve!

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I wouldn't say it's a drawing. It's more like an artpiece! :) If you colored it a bit and made bolder lines, it would become more bold and dramatic. So I actually like how unusual it is. Very unique! :D +1 rep

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