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the awkward moment .. when u curse someone .. but it was actually a different person ><
seriously .. i cursed him like helll and even make the guy who i was cursing cried... he said that was the most harsh things someone ever said to him...
he lietrally cried and walks away from me ;~: i regret that.,..
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Ah, the main character sounds like my type of girl.*ahem*Realistically, it's pretty darn hard to get published. It'll probably be better if you just post your stories on a blog or something, to attract attention and get feedback. Getting your story paper-bound is something that takes a lot of work and talent, as almost every genre ever conceived as been done to death. Of course, if you're doing this for fun and getting published is an afterthought, that's a different story (woah, unintended pun).
I'm terrible at titles, and they usually come to me after I've finished writing whatever I'm working on. Therefore, I can't really help you out on this one. Make sure it's nothing too long-winded or it will sound corny and forced. One word to three word titles general roll off the tongue better, so try to keep it as short as you can. If I knew the entire plot of your story I might be able to think of one, but I can imagine you'd want to avoid spoiling.
Anyhow, good luck with your endeavor!
o.o heheheh lol
well thanks ~ abt publishing it. honestly i just wanted to have fun.. but at the same time i am need some incomes lol ~ publishing it maybe a little too much for now. since i am not even 20+ yet lol
the title... thanks for your advice ^^ heheh
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This is...this is...to mainstream but depending on the execution of the plot it can work out. You need to make sure each character serves a distinct purpose with or without relation to the main character. Also, I'm sure there is an official guideline for how to write mysteries, google it. It's just a bunch of rules to give the main character and the reader fair ground for solving mysteries.
^^'' i just need a title tho.. thanks for ur advice ^^ this is more like a mystery and drama and slice of life and romance novel.. hehe.. its a mixture of several genres... thank you tho ^^
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I am not a good writer but I do have some suggestions (as a reader):
First of all, I have to say, I cannot really pick a title by the text given- maybe if I had the chance to read the full story- I'm sure it's great.
- A short, catchy title- maybe one word that describes the main character, a word (or short phrase) that sums up the THEME of the story, or just the first name of the character, OR a word that is frequently repeated during the story.
- The name of the character as the title- e.g. The strange case of [insert name here] << of course, that's inspired by some books...
- The name of the character AND- e.g. [insert name here] and the [insert object here]
- The PLACE setting of the story- e.g. Murder in [insert place name]
- OK... I am out of ideas, gomen
As I said, I am all out of ideas (gomen again). I am not a proficient writer. Those are just some ideas to get you started.
thank you~
It gave me an idea... but.. its not mainly about the murder... the murder is like the prologue...
this story is mainly abt the life of a girl who is chased down , the divorce, why she was left alone. how her life become so quiet and the next such a ruckus.,.. its hat kind of story..
btw.. thank you Haibara san ~ it helps me to put up a title for my other books.,..
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just as the title .. i need help...
I am thinking of publishing a book....
i have the whole plot all planned out...
but....
i have no freaking idea what's the perfect title for it T^T
it may sound like 'i am a stupid author with no skils' or whatever...
well yea.. i have written 20+ books... and ... hehe... never published it.. and it doesn't have any title for em... all 20 of em .. hehe
so... if i explain the plots.. can some of you help ? onegaishimasu !!! please... need help
The Plot
A long black haired girl, her skin was smooth, a bishoujo as we said in Japan, she has an average height of a normal girl, 17 years old.. Her parents divorced... So she was suppose to live with her mom,, but her mom left her.. her little sister... was gone with her mom.. easily,, she was ignored by her family. so she lives alone in rented room.. she is smart.. never experience love..
one day, a murder happened, her neighbor, Miss 'Puff' was murdered... She went to the crime scene.. Unfortunately she was seen as a suspect... but then, she easily solve it like its a puzzle..
the policemen didn;t believe her especially when she is only a kid, but then the detective came and said she was right depending on the proof she has given, then the case was closed, she went back to her room, thinking everything will turn back to normal, but, once u start with trouble.. trouble will always come your way..
thats the plot... onegaishimasu ! help me,,
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he needs one !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
or he wont get any cooler 0.0 ... -feeling determined-
hehe... with the archenemy, shinichi will get cooler and smarter !!! hehehe
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hehe Japan is the best obviously ~ hehehehe ... better in everything .... hehehehe
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Can someone tell me a site where i can actually see all episodes of Detective conan series ,. i have been missing 3-4 episodes since episode 721... T^T chia-anime or goodanime is not usable --'' and some other same site... anybody know a site that actually reallyy show the episodes with subs
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all... i dont any least fav or most fav...
i never leave an episode behind,,,
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can anybody tell me which episode is when ran remembered the old time of the time when she went to new york with shinichi and with shinichi's mum, anybody please! tell me.
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well, you guys as i know like conan.. as for me since i was a 7 year old girl and now i'm 16 already..
what i wanted to know is, why do you like detective conan ?? people said because it is exciting and adventuress but do you any other explanation than the thing that i have heard almost every time when i ask this question:
WHY!!!
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Look at these and decide. Being conan has its perks
all up to u to decide
oi2.. its a complete pervert if u picture it this way..
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you've got to be kidding ??!! ten minutes!!!
man that was close, i only stayed for only 9 minutes 58 secnd.. hheh..
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well.... all i have in my mind is enjoy before school starts next year!!!!!!!!!!! ;-)
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the call- regina spektor
a year without rain-selena gomez
mine-taylor swift
you belong withe me-taylor swift
white christmas
winter wonderland
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in this movie 15, what I can't wait is when the part Ran scream to "Shinichi if you are somewhere near, save me.... save me"
If conan really turns to Shinichi then he will actually go help her or conan will still be conan and help her as he is without turning back into shinichi.
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but who would you guys rather be?
haibara?????? or conan-kun?????????
surely if it was me i would like to be like like conan-kun (the brilliant brains) but i would like to be like Ai-chan (adventures)
it's going to be an exciting life
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I had been wondering since I first started to wtch detective conan that is about.... 7 years ago, isn't it is hard to go after a bad guy that is about 2 to 3 times bigger that you... imean, conan-kun is just a kid and partically no one believe him coz, he is just a kid... untill Akai Shuuichi gets in the line, but still, isn't it hard...
I was thinking, if I was Conan-kun, how can I live... especially, when I know that any minute by now i could be killed by a complete stranger or the person that I knew all along... actually, if the person is the one that i knew all along, wouldn't that be a big pain to me actually...
well, now i wanted to ask the others, how would you fell if you are Conan-kun or maybe Haibara instead, anyway, don't care who but what do you fell if you were them... please tell me your felling or opinions...
PLEASE, ONIGAI SHIMAS
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today is:
negai goto hitotsu dake - by miho komatsu
and
sakura kiss- ouran hidh school host club (op)
and
parallel hearts- pandora hearts (op)
these are my taste, japenese song althought i do love taylor swift but japenese is the best
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Whoops! Had that case confused with the Evidence That Kept Disappearing case. Good catch, Kaoko!!
thank you very much!
I mean ARIGATO' GOZAIMASU
IT'S BEEN TWO YEARS SINCE I WATCHED THAT EPISODE
You just saved my life...
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Manga and anime are almost teh same, but same as everyone a like manga better thjan anime, and i also agree that te graphic in anime is improving... And for the reminding, i hated when they change the speaking from japenese to english or any other language... At my place they change it into malaysian language... It sounds like the one thats doing the sound is a clown.. It's the worst i could ever imagine if the handsome shinichi kudo's voice sounded like a clown
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i was wondering since i'm already a big girl... i had been wondering nsince i was 12 years old, which episode is when haibara and conan and jodei-sensei got caught in a bus robbery and at that time akai shuuichi was in the bus...
and at that time haibara can feel the precense of one of the men from the black organization, and at that time akai was one of the one that conan suspect as helping the bank robbers... and at that time too, akai was having a cold...
conan was really hard on thinking this time coz, conan and haibara was in life threating place, that is in the bus.. at that time either, jodei-sensei, the fbi, was pretending to be a foreigner... well, thats all i can say, well if anybody knows which episode is that please tell me... begging you...
i will say this to you if you tell which episode is it:
ARIGATO' GOZAIMASU
Do You Feel Like Detective Conan is a Popular Anime Outside Japan?
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honestly.. in my country... sadly .. they think its a below 10's kind of CARTOON T^T
its almost like i am the only one who watches it till episode 700+ .. when i said i am currently watching DC.. people will laugh and make fun of me.. and so far.. the ones whom i met online.. none of em knows what Detective Conan is.. it feels so alone.. but....
i dont care T^T i love DC since i was 7 and i am 19 now... i will always love DC all my life !!
not regretting it !!
its a good series and will always be on my top spot !!