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It was opening number 13, it is the same opening the one Haibara pulled off her mask, that you asked me in my profile~
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N/A: Yo mina-san! Here's the 3rd chapter! I hoped you enjoyed the 2 chapters before this (avoiding tomatoes getting thrown
), the 2 chapters before this, I had completely worked on them in a FLASH! That's why it wasn't very good, and I skipped a lot of parts~ But I hope I did fine in this one! Sorry for if my English isn't that good!The After Battle: Chapter III
It was late at night when Shinichi decided to go home... he really had a marvellous time with Ran at the restaurant! He remembered seeing her face after he confessed to her... ya~ he couldn't hide his smile~
He went home at 11:49 PM...
His mother already went to sleep, while his father is still working in the library. Shinichi was really tired, as he entered his bedroom, changed to his PJ, and then he dozed of to his bed.
(N/A: I forgot to tell you something very important!) About Professor Agasa… his house got a little explosion and burned down due to one of his crazy inventions, and now it's still being fixed by the workers, it wasn't really that serious, but the building needs some repair… so Agasa is living with one of his professor mates. Actually, he was welcomed by Shinichi and his parents, Yusasku and Yukiko Kudo to stay with them while his house is being fixed. The professor was grateful enough to hear this, but he said he had some business at his friend's place.
As the days passes on, Shinichi was busy at the time, discussing the situation with the FBI about the syndicate and their boss… Gin refuse to say anything about their secrets, instead, he would just say with a wicked smile, "You will regret that you ever capture me… you'll regret that you ever confronted us!"
Shinichi also goes to high school as usual… he sometimes goes out and meet inspector Megure on a case and helps him out. The days were going fine just as fine like before he met the syndicate. He then remembered something very important… something… someone… someone he cares for… Haibara!
Oh, that's right! I forgot about Haibara! Thought Shinichi, it had already been more than a week. I wonder if I can see her now…
So, after 2 days… Shinichi went to Beika's Hospital, where Shiho is hospitalized, (Shiho is Haibara… I guess I will use Shiho from now on, so the readers wont get the wrong idea thinking she is still in a child form
).Shinichi went to the recipient desk and asked for the room's number. He was carrying some flowers and a bag containing something, a present?
"Let's see…" Shinichi was searching for the room, "ward 456A… and… ah, found it!"
He stood near the door hesitated to enter. He was the cause if her situation after all… How could he face her?
As he was about to turn the knob, the door opened, and a steady looking female doctor came out from the room.
"You are?" said the doctor noticing Shinichi standing there.
"Ah, I came to visit an acquaintance of mine… she's in this room I believe…" said Shinichi, "how is she?"
"Oh… I just checked her there… she's doing fine, and could leave the hospital in two weeks… is she your girlfriend?"
"Ah, no…"
"I think she needs someone to sit by her side… she looks gloomy and unhappy, try to cheer her up. In that way, she'll recover faster."
"U… uhh… okay… I'll try my best…" said Shinichi promising.
The doctor then opened the door to Shiho's room, he told her she had a visitor, and then let Shinichi in.
"Yo!" greeted Shinichi as he entered the room, as then, he saw Shiho lying at the bed. Her face was pale and weak, her eyes were half open. She noticed him, and than exclaimed in a weak and sore voice "K- Kudo-kun…!"
"Good luck!" whispered the doctor to Shinichi, as he then went out the room.
"Feeling good?"
"*cough*, y-yes… but most importantly… *cough* *cough* why are you here?" she asked him, while helping her self to sit.
"I came to visit you." Said Shinichi smiling, he then arranged the flowers he brought in the vase that was on top of the table.
"But… *cough* *cough*! What happened! *cough* *cough* *cough*!"
"Oi! Haibara! Don't push yourself too much! Relax… there's nothing for you to worry about." He said concerned.
"*cough* *cough* you… you could say that!" said Shiho, "I wanted to know too… *cough* *cough*!"
"Ah, about the syndicate and the FBI?" said Shinichi, "well… how should I put it… everything's been taken care of… the Organization is down… only the boss remains. We still haven't confirmed his location yet… he might still have some comrades or hidden trump-card. Anyway, even if he had something in mind, he wouldn't have the time coming after both of us; his mind would be focused on the FBI, right?"
"That's true…" said Shiho in low voice, "so, did they captured Gin?"
"Ah…" said Shinichi, "but he won't say anything… he's one tough guy. They even tortured him… he still won't blurt anything out about the syndicate… even most of the agent are scared of him; they wouldn't dare go near him. Anyway, you shouldn't think of this in your state… that would only make you worry."
After Shinichi said that, Shiho just turn her face down, her expression was sad… Shinichi didn't what to do. But then, he said, "Haibara…"
Shiho turned to him.
"It's not that I'm mad or anything… I just wanted to ask you about that time… Why… why did you save me…? Why did you come? You weren't suppose to…You could have been killed! It's true that if you hadn't come that I…"
"I was curious…" said Shiho, "so I tracked you with the spare of the Homing Glasses… after I found you… and saw you in that place… about to be killed by Gin… I couldn't help myself; I… jumped there without thinking."
"But why!"
"I… I couldn't stand by and watch you die…" she said with a sad smile, "to me… Kudo-kun, you are the closest person to me in this world after my sister's death… you always there wherever I am in trouble… you always there to comfort me… always there… same for Professor Agasa too… I owe you… not to mention I was the cause of you situation after all... If I hadn't created that drug which made you shrunk, you wouldn't have experienced all this... I cause you a lot of pain and suffering..."
"Haibara…" thought Shinichi sympathetically… then deciding to cheer her up, "Baroo~ what's this all about? Talking like that… it isn't like you at all." said Shinichi, "it's true that creating that drug was something that shouldn't be done... but what happened had happened. There's no changing it. Also, I never blamed you or anything… because, when I thought about it back then, if it weren't for that poison, Gin would have killed me with another method, and I couldn't have survived… same for you, right? If you hadn't shrunk back then, you couldn't have escaped from that gas cellar, right?"
Shiho looked up to him and saw him grinning at her, she turned her head down and said, "That… maybe true… *cough* *cough*!"
"Oi, are you sure you are alright?" asked the concerned Shinichi. He went to her and placed his right hand on her forehead, "Your temperature is really high, your voice doesn't sound good either…"
Shiho turned red, "E- Yes, I'm fine… just leave *cough* me alone *cough* *cough*!"
Shinichi sighed.
There was a big silence. With both of them having nothing to say. Shinichi was sitting at the coach that was in the room reading a newspaper he had in his jacket. Shiho had something that troubled her in her mind.
"Cheer up!" said Shinichi suddenly, standing up from the couch, "the organization has been taken care of, right? Isn't that what you always wished for? Worrying all the time wouldn't help at all, right? Also, I have to go now, I have an appointment with Hattori… mah, I will try to come back tomorrow to visit you again. Do you need anything?"
"Nothing in particular…"
"Here…" he handed her a present bag, "this is for you! Well, see you~ I'll try to come again! Jaa na!"
"Ah… wait! K- Kudo-kun…!"
"What?"
"I… I wanted to say…" she stuttered, blushing, "I'm happy that you came… thank you for visiting…!"
"Ah, don't mention it!" He said smiling, "we are partners, right? I'll always be there if you need anything! Jaa, if you'll excuse me!"
He waved at her then left and closed the door behind him.
Shiho gratefully smiled as he left. She then took the bag she received from him and opened it. Inside, she found a Sai Brand's wallet, a Black Prada bag, and also, there was a new box containing a cell-phone (Shiho's cell-phone was damaged and crashed, when she went to rescue Shinichi that time). And deep inside the bag she found a piece of paper; it said "GET WELL SOON, HAIBARA!"
The next day Shinichi visited again. This time he brought some books. And of course, it was Sherlock Holmes novels…
"Ara… do you think I'm interested in these kind of stuff? I'm not a mystery maniac, you know…"
"Come one~ it was only this that I cold ever think of! And, I didn't just bring that. I brought you a popular novel book," he handed the book over, the title was, "The Crazy Scientist's Days of Glories and Worries"
She stared at it with a dull face, "Just because I'm a scientist, that doesn't mean I'm interested in reading a book about science," Shiho said in a dull tone.
"Hahaha! Well, anyway, it wasn't that bad… I read it and it was kind of interesting. Here! I'll read them to you!"
Shinichi then read the novel to Shiho. Although she wasn't really interested, she appreciated his care for her, and listened patiently.
"The doctor then said to his patient, 'YOU WASTED MY TIME! HOW DARE YOU!' the patient was shocked as she heard this, she took her bag and ran out the door with tears on her eyes!"
Shiho yawned… and Shinichi noticed and sighed, "hah~ well? How about Sherlock Holmes?"
The days passed on as Shinichi visited Shiho almost everyday, she didn't seem to care, but inside she was delighted and eagerly looked forward to his visits!
One day, when Shinichi went to visit Shiho, he met the female doctor on the hallway.
"She can go home now? Is that true? What about the fever and her wounds?"
"She seems fine. I just checked her and the results were O.K.!" said the doctor in a cheerful tone, "Thank you sir! You've been a great help! Ever since you visited her from that day, her worried and gloomy face suddenly turned into a charming angel!"
"Really?"
"Even I was surprised! I couldn't have imagined it!" said the doctor, "you can take her home tomorrow. But since she didn't walk for a long time, we'll give her a wheelchair."
"Thank you very much! That's very kind of you!"
Then next day, Shiho was released from the hospital… although now that Agasa's house is not available… where is she going to stay?
"Is it really ok? For me to…" Shiho asked Shinichi. As he was pushing the wheelchair she was sitting on.
"It's alright! It's alright! You don't have to worry about it!" He said with a grin.
As in no time, they already had reached the front gate of Kudo's house.
Shinichi gently opened the front gate, and drove Shiho's wheelchair to the house's front door, he then opened it and went inside. Inside was pitched dark, they barely could see anything.
"Hey, could you t least turn on the light?" said Shiho to Shinichi, she was annoyed at his weird behaviour.
He ignored her and kept pushing the wheelchair.
"Hey~"
Shinichi suddenly stopped at the living room.
"Huh?" Shiho was confused. She couldn't see anything, because it was dim black.
Someone flicked the switch and the room were bright! And a SUPER SURPRISE was to be SEEN!
What on earth is it? What is the surprise? And who was there?
Look forward for the next chapter!
And please don't forget to… REVIEW!
To be continued~
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They look good
Keep up the good work!Thanks~
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Hey~ you are somewhat like me~ I'm 15 years old girl, and I love writing~ and somehow lazy in many ways~ COOL~~~ Nice to meet you!
And welcome to Detective Conan World! -
I love drawing! And I admire Gosho Aoyama how he draws~ also, I never take any special drawing lessons in my life, so I only draws withing my own interest~ Here's my 4 drawings that I manage to picture it... sorry~ the camera isn't that good
"!1. I draw Conan Edogawa when I was really bored. I was practicing to draw hands~
2. This gentlemen is based of Detective Conan's Kaitou KID! I was planning to make a novel and him as the main character... but dropped on the idea~
3. This is my first admired work, called "Fruit Mix" also, it doesn't have anything with Detective Conan... I would like you guys to see~
I draw it when I was 13 years old: 
4. this is the second version of Fruit Mix, I didn't completed it yet...
More!
Incomplete Sketch of Naruto
Ninja Style Kick (with random pet I had in mind)
A character I created for my story.
Another drawing of the character above.
GIFs I, Kaoko Made
I just love seeing Haibara being tortured! xD
Slaps Haibara (over and over again)
Awesome!
Sato's Awesome Moves
OMG, one of best scenes ever!
Gin Shoots Sherry
[15-03-2011]
Sonoko's Abnormal Laugh
Sonoko's Abnormal Revenge
DeviantArt ID: http://d-kaoko.deviantart.com/
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My friend's grandma still reads Doraemon...
Now that's interesting~ you got me! Well, my grandmother used to watch Doraemon on TV, but I don't think that she ever reads the comic... well, Doraemon is funny and interesting, I used to like it very much when I was a kid, even my mother who isn't an anime fan likes it
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Since you are a member that's been here a while, like Shuu stated, it's not really necessary to welcome you. However, it is nice to learn a bit about you and your history with both Detective Conan and your life.
I really find it interesting from the countries you've visited and the languages you know. How privileged you are, despite you aren't attending school anymore. :3 It's interesting to know the semi-humorous story behind getting to know Conan as well, and even more still that you are continually learning and furthering your education for Japanese (I myself am holding up on that endeavor for the time being, since I have other matters to worry on) and other languages.
Thank you for your kind words
.i don't think I need to say welcome anymore... coz you have been here for like before me (1 month). You mean that your grandma is interested in mangas? Or does she buy them just for fun as a dc manga only cost 3 us$ here in Indonesia ad since ur grandma has a mansion, I consider her as rich.
Chigau yo! My grandmother is not a fan of Detective Conan or any manga or animes! It's true that the mansion is hers after my grandfather's death, but then, after she died, my aunty (my mother's sister) is living there with her 3 children. My cousins the ones who are fans of manga! Not my grandmother! Have you ever consider a woman late at her age, reading mangas!!! Hahahaha, it's very funny just to imagine it! And even if there's one... I would like to see it
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So you are trying to say that
Ran=
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Mori and Conan =
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right???
Sonotour da yo! Hahaha~ yes that's exactly what I meant~ by the way, those emoticons looked really funny and cute~ do you know one called Onion-tou? Hahahaha! It's very funny and very cute! And to tell you something, this story id DISCONTINUED!! Thank you for reading!
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Ohayo mina-san!
Sorry¬ I had logged in long time ago, bu I never introduced myself properly...
First of all
... I'm a human 
... and a weird one 
. My name/alias is Kaoko (Kaoko is my Japanese name, though, no one calls me that. Most people call me Cola (pronounced as 'Cola' for soda 'Coca-Cola' (it's more like a second name to me 
)), I know it's pretty rare and that's why I chose it And you probably think that I am a Kaito x Aoko fan (as one of the members pointed it out
) but unfortunately... I am not 
Here's a basic history of Kaoko:
Although it's rather lame (no, it's cool
!).At first my public name was 'Miss Blue Hyuga', yes I know... it was totally uncool
! I put 'Blue', because it's my favorite color. And the name 'Hyuga', I took it from the anime series, Naruto... yeah, the Hyuga Clan that is... And Hinata Hyuga is one of my favorite characters.After awhile, I thought it was kind of lame... and I decided to change it...
And 'Kaoko' came to mind
... Just to let you know, 'Kaoko' is a name that just popped into my head from nowhere
... then I tried to figure out if 'Kaoko' had any special meanings
. I googled on the web for 'List of Japanese Female Names'. I got one amazingly long list, but I just couldn't find 'Kaoko' in there
. Umm... and then I googled it in Google Images, but all they give me is these weird picture of strange products (that I've never heard of
). If I tried to figure out myself what does 'Kaoko' stands for (in Japanese)... it'd be: '顔' (kao), a Kanji for 'face', and '子' (ko) a Kanji for 'child'... Face Child? Weird... makes no sense at all
!So... yeah, I decided to put 'Kaoko', the mysterious name
... Ah! No, no, no
! Actually... of how I got the name was: My real name begins with 'K', and if you tried to Japanize it, it'd turn to 'Kaora'... I actually took away the 'ra', and added the 'ko' instead. So it became 'Kaoko'... yeah, 'Kaoko' is a pretty cool name so I decided that it should be my alias 
.And then when I tried to change my display name to 'Kaoko', just 'Kaoko' itself sounded boring... so I added 'Detective', which sounded more interesting and cool
.Anyway, I was born in September 23rd and year of birth of Detective Conan series
.Detective Conan:
I first know that show/series when I had no mind/brain of my own
. The first time I knew about Detective Conan was at my grandmother’s mansion, I was 6-7 years old back then and I can remember that I was such brat .Also, now my grandmother is no longer alive, my aunty lives there... there’s a bookshelf in the living-room full with manga and comics… although, I always picked manga such as Doraemon, Crayon Shin-chan, Dragon Ball, Ninja Hattori, Bobo-chan, etc. mangas that interest 3-7 years old children (although Shin-chan is not for small children
, but I didn’t care at all, since it’s very funny 
).When I read all the mangas that I liked in the bookshelf
, I decided to read mangas that I didn’t read or know about . That’s when Detective Conan caught my eyes; my first expression when I saw the cover was that the cover doesn’t interest me at all 
, since the background was a real picture (not drawings), but because I don’t have anything to read at the moment, I decided to take a look and read it 
…I took the book with me at night time to my room and begin to see inside
… Woh¬ Blood?! Corpse?! Body in pieces?! AAAAAHHHHHHHHHH 
(but interesting 
)¬!!It’s true that that night I did have a nightmare… after that day; I tried to be brave and see it! Also, I did! I tried to hold my heart from bursting! Well, it was very interesting! Even though I couldn't understand anything at the moment, and couldn't know what was going on (the volume that I read wasn't the 1st volume)... I don't know how but, I saw something and I begun to like it, I can't remember what it was, but I think it was something to do with Ran and Shinichi's romantic time~ Hahahaha!
I don't have a damn clue how I got however hooked to the show when I found myself addicted! Even though I don't have brain at the moment, I got the general idea of the story
.Brat -> crush -> BO
Brat = adult -> love -> girl (Ran)
Haibara -> make poison, ruined brat life
Moustache man -> stupid
Agasa -> Doraemon
BO -> bad
At that time, I liked romance. But not the kind of romance when the two couples always says 'I love you' to each other all the time, hugging kissing and all!! And in no time they will fight and depart!!! I like a kind of romance that between two people yet revealing their true feelings to each other... that's what I can call romantic! Ah, please don't considere me rude, I'm only speaking my mind XD!
At that time, I wasn't so hook at the anime, if they are broadcasting it on the TV, I will eagerly watch, and if there ain't, I'm not complaining... I'm beginning to get very interested in it when I was in the age of 13... I read all the mangas (online, beecause in the country I was staying in, I can't find anywhere to buy it, also, ordering it from Amazon, the fee is too expensive), and now I'm watching the anime, episode... umm... 330 and up... I also watch episodes that was originally from the manga, since in the anime, they usually shows up more details... I prefer watching Detective Conan in Japanese, because in American version, they changes the name (whichi wasn't necessary
), and some of the voice actors/actress doesn't suit the characters. Like Conan's voice in English version, it's too childish and sounds quite like a woman... Ran's voice is too grown up! Kogoro's voice doesn't quite suit him. In Japanese version, his voice is harsh and more like him... in English version, his voice just quite doesn't suit him (even if the voice actor had a nice voice), he sounds more like a polite gentelmen then a drunk, womanizer and a freak (as in Japanese version My 5 top animes are: Detective Conan, Naruto, One Piece, Fairy Tail and maybe Bleach...
Oh, I think I said too much... but before I say goodbye, I would like to tell you something... I liked writing stories from my mind! Here's the link of some of the stories I made (please read them and leave the comments here or there if you have an account!): www.goodreads.com/story/list/3867442
And here's my link to Fan-Fiction site: www.fanfiction.net/~kaokoarai
Sayonara! And Arigatou! Thank you for reading
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I think it's the chapter when Jodie took Haibara (who was really Conan). After 'Araide' took off his mask, which revealed to be Vermouth in disguise... the chapter is... in the four hundreds... and Akai... I think when Ran and Conan met him when he went out of the Telephone box (???), and Ran said he 'I don't think he is a bad guy though... because I saw him with the FBIs...' well, something along those lines... and Akai and Conan became allies was in chapter before 600... I'm not exactly sure though... but I'll check again later
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She may have gone under a facial operation
Ah yes, I have thought of that too¬ But usually, if a famous actress were to perform a facial surgery, that will be a big news¬ although, it's a different case is she did that secretly XD but there's a possibility that she took the drug right??
PhantomAi agrees with my opinion :smile:
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please come out with the 3rd part soon >w< im dyin to read it... although i really wish shinichi would end up with shiho... pleaaaase make them get together and make ran fall in love with someone else... make shinichi have started to fall out of her heart so that they slowly distance from a romantic relationship.. bring on the shinichiXshiho pleaaase!
Yo! I thank you for reading, and was very pleased to read your comment... umm... about bringing Shiho and Shinichi together... although, I like Shiho and Shinichi to be couples, but I don't think that it would ever happen in the real story
, because Ran and Shinichi were childhood friends, and that would be very sad if they didn't go together XD. Also, if I made Ran die in the story and bring Shiho and Shinichi together, that would make Ran's supporter upset >_<... and if I make her go with someone else... that doesn't quite just fit for what I had in mind (gomenasai!). But, I would make something unbelievable happen, that anyone could never have thought before! Even maybe you will like it! So, please be patient ! Something will happen to both Shiho and Shinchi! Something unthinkable! -
It was holiday 09:00 AM.
"Ring, ring, ring", rang the clock in Kogoro Mouri and Conan's room, "ring, ring ring... ring ring ring... RING RING RING, RING RONG RING RONG RUNG BANG TONG TONG!" But they were still sleeping...
After 1 hour...
"Otou-san~, Conan-kun~..." cames Ran's voice from behind the door, "wake up already, it's getting late~..." she yelled annoyed, then she burst the door open with her karate... she walked up to the curtains and opened it, they yawned and covered them selves with blankets lazily.
"Mooo~" Ran sighed, "sigh... still sleeping... would I have to use my Karate to wake you guys up..." then she smashed the clock that was ringing abnormally, Conan and Kogoro jumped from their beds.
"I'm...I'm a wake Ran-neechan..." Said Conan trying to act serious, then they ran to the restroom as fast as they can... they washed their faces and ran to the table...What a surprise! The breakfast was already there!
"Wow... You are so kind, Ran" They thought, then they start eating...
"AH... Its cold" said Conan.
"What? cold?..." asked Ran, "AH, you mean the breakfast?... Gomenasai~, I made it one hour ago, while you guys were still sleeping, I thought it wouldn't be that hard waking you guys up, cause..."
But they weren't listening ! They were watching TV!... Ran turns red, then she smashed the table, splitting it into two pieces...
"CAUSE, OF COURSE," Ran shouted, "CAUSE, OTOU-SAN, YOU HAD PROMISED US TO TAKE US ON HOLIDAY TO OSAKA!" she then turned to Conan with a devilish face, "Isn't that right, Conan-kun?
"U... Un!", Conan nodded, frightened, he then forced out a laugh "Ahahaha..."
"But... but..." Conan and Kogoro said together
Ran smashed the drawer that was behind her, "Any excuses...?" she then said with an evil smile.
"N... No!" they said together, frightened.
"stupid Ran..." Conan thought "Whenever she's angry she has to do that..."
"Never should have let her take karate lessons..." then Kogoro thought.
It will be continued (not sure), and Thank you for reading.
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Yo! This is the second chapter of The After Battle (I think I chose the title too quickly, I want to change it, but I can't after I had posted it, so let just get along with it XD !), I worked on it just recently, so please enjoy!
The After Battle - Chapter 2:
Shinichi was still clinging to the wall, he can't stop thinking... about how the fight between the BO and FBI going on... and also, he was worried about Haibara... her situation was serious, Gin shot at some of her vital points, one close to her liver, and when she was in the ambulance, she was bleeding alot... so, the hospital need to take a blood transfusion from the bank nearby... also, it's already done... but about the surgery... they might not make it...
Haibara... Damn it! Why this have to happen!! If she... if she couldn't make it, this... this would be all my fault! Haibara, please be alright!
1 hour had past...
He was waiting... (he couldn't solve the code on the scrap of paper due to his worry T_T)
2 hours had past...
He fell asleep on the bench...
4 hours...
It was 1 o'clock at late night.
6 hours...
The sign of the surgery room was still red... "UNDER OPERATION" it says.
After 8 hours... a sudden noise woke Shinichi up. The surgery was finished... a doctor walked up to him, and told him what happened... the surgery... the surgery was... the surgery was a success!! He then sighed with relief, Haibara...! He asked the doctor if he can see her...
"Ah, about that... you can't at the time being. The blast she took was too great, even after the surgery her condition is still... it was very lucky that you got her to the hospital in time... if you had delayed it just a bit more, her life wouldn't have been saved. Now she is in the care of a special surgeon... so there's nothing to worry."
"Ah, I see..."
"You can visit her after a week maybe... please be patient. Also Sir, you looked tired waiting all this time... I can get my acquintance to get you home."
"Ah, that was very nice you Sir, but I think I'll take a taxi..."
Shinichi got out from the taxi and was infront of his mansion's gate...
He went into his house, and to his surprise to see his parents were there... "Kaa-san! Too-san! Why are you guys here?!"
"We were worried about you, Shin-chan!" Said his mother, looking worried."Look at yourself! Are you injured?!"
"Ah, no... this isn't my blood..."
"Judging that you came home... means that you are safe..." said his father. He was reading the newspaper, and Shinichi couldn't see his face,
because the newspaper was covering it, he then said with a relaxed tone, "since you are here safe and sound... my worries had gone like a puff of smoke."
"Haa..." said Shinichi with a dull face, "but didn't I told you in the phone...? I told you-"
"But Shin-chan! Would you think we would just enjoy ourselves there knowing our son is in danger!?"
"Hai, Hai...!"
Shinichi then changed his clothes which was covered with Haibara's blood... and after that he told his parents what happened. Although, he was very tired...
"So? Did you see her yet?" said his mother.
"What? Who?"
"Of course, I'm talking about her! Your girlfriend~" Yukiko said teasingly.
"You mean Ran?" said Shinichi pretending he just noticed, "No... not yet... I think I will see her later, not now."
The next two days...
Jodie-sensei came to Kudo's house, and she informed Shinichi for what happened:
Gin was arrested...
Vodka comitted suicide as he was cornered...
Vermouth is still one the run, they had no idea where she is or what she's plotting...
Korn & Chianti was arrested too.
The boss and his location is still unknown...
Their hideout was found and the FBI arrest most of them...
"Also, I heard that little girl was shot by Gin, how is she?"
"Ah, you mean Haibara?" Said Shinichi, "her condition is still not good. Although the surgery was a success..."
"I see..."
"Ah, Jodie-sensei, I've solved the code that was in the scrap of paper, and I have an idea where could the Boss's location is... although, I'm not really sure, this might be a trap..."
So, Shinichi and Jodie discussed over it in the living room... Shinichi gave her a full explanation... (I have no idea what they are talking about >_<). Also, the discussion is over, and Jodie-sensei left to inform Akai Shuuichi and the FBI.
Then next day...
Shinichi went to visit Ran, he is now finally relaxed that most of the men in black has been arrested... although, there's still something to worry about... the Boss... but since his important members are no longer there for him, he can do nothing much... even if they are, he'll be focusing on the FBI, not Shinichi Kudo & Sherry...
Ran was so happy to see Shinichi, and she even shed tears of happiness! Shinichi decided that he would like to talk to her in a private, in a restaurant where he and she last time went together. She agreed. The appointment was again in 'Central Kyoto Tower's Sight-Seeing Restaurant'.
At The Central Kyoto Tower's Sight-Seeing Restaurant, 7:16 PM:
"Here again?" said Ran.
"Hahaha!" Laughed Shinichi, "We didn't finish the last time we came here, right?"
"Oh? So, what's this thing you want to discuss about?"
"Actually... actually... the real thing is..."
"Ah, what about this case that took you too long to solve?" Said Ran, "I'm so curious...! I would like to hear about it
""Ah, about that... well, it's so complicated, and you might not understand most of it, also, you might get bored." Lied Shinichi.
"Geez... I thought you would be happy to tell me about the case... oh, by the way. Do you know Conan's address in US?" Ran asked suddenly, "you know, I quite miss him..." she said with a sad smile, "I wanted to write him letters and see how's he doing... after living with us for quite a long time, I felt like he's kind of like a little brother to me... You know Shinichi... even though you were far away... I always thinking about you... wishing you good luck... but I felt somehow strange... like you were always next to me... always there protecting me... always there for me..."
"Really?" said Shinichi, not finding the words to say anything else.
"But... whenever I looked... it was always Conan... I always wondering... if Conan were really you... if so... I would be very happy... now that he's gone... I felt somehow strange..." she then said, "ah, I sound so silly...", she then wiped her tears that rolled down her cheeks...
"Do you miss me that much? Ran-neechan!" said Shinichi in Conan's voice (wearing his bowtie), and also, he wore the glasses he use to wear as Conan. "Sorry to hide it from you all this time, Ran... the truth is that Conan and I were acually and always the same person..." he said suddenly, surprising her and made her speechless.
He then told her everything! How he was poisoned with a mysterious drug, and how he shrunk to his 6 years old self... how Agasa told him not to tell anyone... he told her that he lived with her in the Detective agency was to get information from those men in black (it wasn't to spy on her)... he then told her that it was all for her sake... to keep her away from danger...
After hearing all this, Ran first, was speechless... and then tears were filling her eyes, she then smiled from relief, "I'm so glad...! That you finally told me yourself. I was always suspecting you, but each time I do, you always proves me wrong... wait, what about at the school festival that last time? I saw Conan when you were there at the present!"
Shinichi then told her it was Haibara disguised as him.
"Eh, and what about the woman who claims to be Conan's mother?"
He told her it was Yukiko Kudo, his mother who disguised herself as a fat woman. Then Shinichi told her about Sherry, who was a former member of the organization, but now betrayed them, was actually Ai Haibara that lives in the professor's house. That also made Ran surprise. He then told all what happened.
Ran was pissed of too, because of how many times he had deceived her. She somehow looked like a foolish woman just then. Then she remembered... something that made her blush and angry at the same time! The time when she took a bath with Conan/Shinichi, the time when she slept with him in the same bed (because she was scared), and the most embarassing time of all, when she told Conan/Shinichi that she loves him!
But before she could rampage, Shinichi told her with a red face that towards her, he feels the same, he told her that he... loved her... he loved her more than anyone in this world!
Ran's anger went like a puff of smoke! Instead, her face went red like tomato! She too, told her true feelings directly to Shinichi (although she already told him [Conan] before
).Anyway, the romantic dinner continues... so let's skip it! Let's leave them alone >,<! (Sorry if the confession isn't that good T_T, I'm not good writing those [romance] kind of things!)
To be continued... (next chapter's hint: Shinichi Kudo visits Shiho Miyano)
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But there is a possibility that she may have died after drinking APTX 4869. And, she isn't sure that it's safe. Why should she drink it then?
Maybe she intends to commit suicide like Sherry, or maybe she mistook it for a medicine? You never know~
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Yo! I just read the manga and I was wrong! Sorry!!! I can't delete this since I already posted it!
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List of the best posts about what is causing Vermouth's abnormal youth.
If you are thinking of replying to any of the posts, please remember some of the users who made these posts are no longer active and may not reply. Also, just because a user gives evidence in support or against a certain theory doesn't mean they believe it. Some people like to change their minds, test out an idea, or play devil's advocate.
Commentary by Username
•jebbifurzz P1 P2 P3 - Vermouth took APTX 4869 (part of a debate)
•detectiveshinichi - Discussion of Org's goal, and Vermouth did not use APTX, instead something else a long time ago stopped her aging
•Chekhov MacGuffin P1 P2 P3 P4 - Vermouth did not take APTX, Sharon's mother may be Vermouth as well (part of a debate with DetectiveSherry)
•DetectiveSherry P1 P2 P3 P4 P5 P6 - Vermouth was not Sharon's mother, took APTX ten years ago (part of a debate with Chekhov MacGuffin)
•Kyuuketsuki - Sharon trained Chris to perfectly take over her identity.
•Black Demon - Vermouth has a baby, possibly an abnormal baby.
•Black Demon - Vermouth's body is currently youthful, thus she didn't have plastic surgery
•ValleyofFear P1 P2 P3 - Sharon and Chris are separate people, the fingerprints were fakes (part of a debate with Chekhov MacGuffin)
•Chekhov MacGuffin P1 P2 - Sharon and Chris are the same person, the fingerprints could not be faked, timeline of Vermouth's past assuming Sharon and Chris are the same person. (part of a debate with ValleyofFear)
Similar Interest threads
The goal of the Black Organization
What's The Secret Behind Vermouth's Youth?
What do you think the reason behind Vermouth's youth!?
I have a unimaginable guess why she looked younger than her age! Do you want to hear it? Hahahahahahahhahaha! Maybe she swallowed the same drug that Shinichi Kudo and Shiho Miyano swallowed! APTX4869??? Hah! So, what do you think? Discuss it here!
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Shuuichi Akai's Death Theory!
Do you think Akai Shuuichi is dead or alive?
Do you think Akai Shuuichi is dead? If so, then who's that Scar Akai?
If he that Scar Akai is actually him, how did he manage to escape that time at Reiha Pass? And what trick did he and Kir used to fool the organization?
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Chiba's girlfriend from 13 years ago! Who could it be?
I had quite an idea who's that girl that Chiba was talking about! Although, I'm not quite sure myself... she could be Eri's secretary! Midori Kuriyama! Don't you think so too? They had quite the same sharp eyes. Although, their hairstyle doesn't look the same... but they looked alike in many ways! So, what do you think? Who's ever think the same way, give their feedbacks here! And see when the next chapter comes out if our guess is right or not!
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Not bad... Though it was a bit too rush. There are grammar errors and spelling mistakes but who really cares. The plot was fine and can't wait to press the link, so...that's it now, I wanna read ur other stories
Yo Akai-san! Thanks for the reply! Wow, you seem smarter than your age! Oh, sorry if my writing isn't that good
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Yo, mina-san!
About my fictional story, let's begin!
Some times later, the FBI, Conan, Haibara, had a big fight with the Black Organization, but before hand Ai and Conan managed to steal the drug APTX (number what? I forgot >_<), with that, Ai managed to create the antidote, so when the big event accured Ai and Conan had gained their original body, Shinichi and Shiho... the fight is too long and I might take ages in writing it~ so I'll skip the fight
But I'll tell you the interesting part at the scene in the middle of the battle;
Gin pointed a gun at an injured Shinichi Kudo and said this, 'I didn't quite imagine that you'll still be alive after taking that poisounos drug... but now, I'll be sure to take your life..."
As Gin about to pull the trigger, a strange figure appeared from nowhere and jumped infront of Kudo, using itself as a shield to protect him. As soon as the unknown person appeared, Gin has already shot 6 times nonstop, the bullets pierced through that person's body and lots of blood spalatterd on the floor, but she/he refuse her/his body to fall, and then when it hit the last bullet, that person fells in pain... can you guess who's that person is?
And then to Shinichi's shock after he saw the person's face, he yelled, "HAIBARAAAAAA~~~!!!"
"Ho~ It saves me the time to look for you... Sherry!" said Gin with a wicked grin. "So you are the man that helped this little traitor... Kudo Shinichi... I would like to know the story how you two became an ally, but I guess that would just be a waste of time..."
Gin then loaded his gun and was pointed the gun at Kudo, he was ready to shoot. Shinichi looks helpless, but he was frowning at Gin, -Damn it! I just wish I can get Haibara out of here!- he thought.
As he was about to pull the trigger, a sudden gunshot was heared, and Gin was shot in his legs and kidneys... can you guess who is that person is? Who shot Gin?
Of course, i's Shuuichi Akai! Gin's biggest rival! Akai then walked cooly to Gin...
"A- Akai... Shuichi" Gin muttered. "So I guessed I was right... you somehow escaped that time using a subtitude..."
Akai then said smiling, "you can't get rid of me that easily... "
"Haibara!" Shinichi rans towards the injured Haibara (I feel more comfortable in calling her Haibara than Shiho ^,^), she was covered with blood, her face looks really pale, her eyes was open, but it looks deadly. "Hang in there! Haibara! Oi...! Say something! Haibara!"
Akai noticed them and he took out his cellphone, he calls the ambulance and a reinforcement.
"Get out of here while you can," said Akai to Shinichi. "You can still save her... and you will just be in my way here... take the shortcut from the back door."
"A-ah..." agreed Shinichi. He then carefully carried Haibara in his arms and ran as fast as he can, -good luck, Akai-san!- he said in his thoughts.
"Hmph, to think that you'll get me this easily..." said Gin to Akai.
"Why not? You seem helpless there." said Akai smiling. He then noticed Gin was about to take the gun on the floor (he dropped earlier when Akai shot him), but Akai was carefull, he shot Gin's left arm, "don't bother," he said, "I'll just shoot you again if you try anything funny..."
Akai heard something strange, as then a sudden blast opened the door and 2 members lunched into the room. It was Vodka and Pal... That's when the big battle between the member of the Black Organization and Shuuichi Akai begins! As you see, Gin is strong, even with those injury, he ca still stand and fight. The location where they fight is in a building under construction... so it was a little tough you see~
Let's skip the fight part! Without seeing it in action (manga & anime), it's very boring~
So let's go to Shiho and Shinichi part~ as soon as Shinichi went out with Shiho in his arms they saw the ambulance already arrived. Haibara was soon dispatched inside the ambulance, followed by Shinichi. They put a surgical mask on her, and the doctor who was with them gave her the first aid, and somehow tried to stop the blood.
"Haibara..." whishpered Shinichi regretfully, if he would only listened to her back then...
3 hours ago...
"Don't go!" Yelled Haibara at Shinichi fiercely, "you'll only get yourself killed!"
"Shut up! You are annoying! This is the moments I've been waiting for... for a very long time... I can't just stop here and do nothing..." said Shinichi turning his back at Haibara, he was ready to go...
"Can't you understand!? You don't know how many are in there, if you just rush yourself inside like... that... you'll-"
Shinichi shot Haibara with his watch and catched her before she fells. He then placed her on the sofa (in the unknown building).
At the present...
"F- fool..." muttered Haibara, "didn't I... told... *cough* you... *cough* *cough*... you... not... to *cough*" blood suddenly burst out of her mouth, and she started coughing abnormally.
"Haibara...!"
The doctor suddenly went to her and treated her immediately. They went to the nearby hospital, and Haibara was immeditely transported to a surgery room.
Shinichi was waiting, and at the same time thinking about the Black Orgnazation and the FBI... I wonder... how's the battle's going on... I want to be a help... but... there's just nothing I can do there! I even got Haibara in this mess! She tried to save me... why...? Depending on her character... I never imagine she would do such a thing... no... worrying would just be a waste of time... to kill time, I would solve the riddle behind this code...
He was viewing at a scrap of paper filled with codes and puzzles...
To be continued...
Kaoko's Note (authors note XD , Kaoko is my pen name [Miss Blue Hyuga]):
Yo! How was it?! Did you guys likes it? Well, I hope so! Sometimes I always had these kind of stories in mind, about Detective Conan, Naruto, One Piece, and other animes... but I would never imagine that there's this special Forum in Detective Conan aspecially for writing your fan imagination story... AMAZING! Actually about the story I wrote, that was my first time publishing one (I mean, I've wrote quite a lot of stories, but I never wrote a fan fiction! I never even thought of writing one!). I tried to make the character as their ownselves as hard as possible, also it's true that Gin is more smarter (from what I wrote) and a lot cooler and cunning... and Shinichi is more careful and cautious, and I guess Haibara is more... umm... sorry! I don't know how to describe it in words XD! But, just to remind you, I don't own Detective Conan, only Gosho Aoyama does! I'm just a fan with an imagination, and wrote what was in my head
! I'll continue this imagination story of mine in quit in time (INSH). And also, I had quite an idea who will read this, so I'm going to give them a quick chit-chat :To Southpaw-san: Thank you for the FanFicion site! I really appreciated! Also I just signed up, and just beginning to get familiar with it, and after completing writing what I have in mind here in Detective Conan World I'll transfer them to FanFiction >_<! Also I read some of your stories, and phew! It's Amazing! Especially I love the 'Late Night Sience'! Hahaha... I haven't read the rest yet, but I'll try to read them when I have the time
To Shuuichi Akai-san: Yo! You are always an active member and I know you would read this! Thanks for reading! Why don't you make a story too? I'm sure it will be wonderful! Also, I hope you are glad to read this one, because it has Shuuichi Akai (I guessed he's your favorite character
well, he's one of my favorite character too!), right!? Hahaha! I always see you anywhere~ Jaa naa~To Everyone: Thank you for reading! I hoped you liked it! Also, keep an eye on the next chapter! To tell you the truth, I'm not quite good in writing mysteries or adventures or any brain stories that requires solving puzzles and stuff
, but I liked writing amusing stories that makes people smile~ if you would like to read my amusing stories I made, please follow this link: www.goodreads.com/story/list/3867442, and also... if you read them, can you guys leave a comment here? Or there if you have an account ... anyways, thank you! -
there's already a section for fan art, so I'm not certain what you're asking here. Also, if people want to look at DC art, there are plenty of other places on the 'net to find it
...not to mention, there's probably a few good pics on the wikiAh~ You always object to my ideas, Southpaw-san~
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Ahh~~~ I'm so delighted to see your comment! Lovely! Thank you my friend~ I'm so glad you liked my fan-fic
, there'll be a big surprise later, even something you couldn't imagine! I'm actually not a fan of RanXShinichi, I'm just following the original story~ I like Shiho and Shinichi to be together, but then if you still hoping it that way, and in the end they wouldn't be together, you would be upset, right? Ah~ Anyway thank you, thank you so much my dear reader! I have my stories stocking up here: www.goodreads.com/story/list/3867442 wanna read them? Next time when I add up chapter 4, be sure to be the first to READ IT!