Spiritgal304

And the plot thickens... wait THE PLOT?! *jumps for joy* Yay more plot!

I need to learn to come here and post more often. This forum not JUST this thread. XD Umm yeah....

This opening is a lot better then 30. (No more random dancing...whatever.) Even if the first part of the opening reminded me of Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood's 3rd opening. Which is why this had to be made: (Yes, there's a smaller version in my sig already.)

I've been asking around but if I really REALLY need someone I'll be sure to ask you guys. There's only really two lines with very strong language. I just didn't want to get in trouble not giving any warning. It's not really bad other then those lines of dialogue (at least for now from act 1). Ah ha ha, that's when I'm posting and I don't write that much when I post. I forgot to proofread my act 1 and I swear I thought the instructor was going to hit me with something since I forgot too. Course it could have also been because everyone else forgot to proofread their scripts too.

Here's the deal. I'm terrible at proofreading my own stuff so I'm trying to enlist the help of some people who would be willing to read my script. Here's a few things you'll have to be able to do to help me: Be fluent in the English language and know grammar! Be able to provide me with a working email address to send you the script. Be at least 16 years or older since there is some "strong language" in the script. Things you don't have to be able to do (or have) but would be a plus if you could: Know script writing format. Have celtx script writing software on your computer. (If you don't just tell me so I can send you a different format.) Be familiar with story structure. If you are able to help me out please either reply to this post, PM me or you can email me. My email is in my profile. My act 2 is due on Tuesday so I should have it all ready for proofreading on Monday. I'll also send my act 1 along with it so you won't be left in the dark with what has happened before in the story.