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#141 Valkyrie

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Posted 12 February 2012 - 07:45 AM

Oh not that! :P I meant the people who write the books! science usually ignores grammar rulings. And shouldn't it be "has" instead of "have"? This is confusing Posted Image

You're right! :blink: I don't usually check my grammar when talking informally. No point. :P

And Science books usually ignore grammar but it's not true necessarily true.

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Posted 14 February 2012 - 08:15 AM

Actually, Ed0gawa was correct when he used 'is concerned'. While "concerned" is past tense, "is concerned" is present tense.

Valkyrie's sentence is incorrect, however, although I'm struggling to explain why ^^' Probably because I should be asleep right now. What I can tell you is that just because you are talking about something in the present, doesn't mean that absolutely everything in the sentence must be in present tense.

"Right-angled triangle" always remains that way, no matter what tense the rest of the sentence is in. "Right-angled" is the description of the triangle.

Eg.
Sarah crouched down to pick up the folded piece of paper.

This sentence is being told in past tense, so why did I not write "picked up"?

If we break this sentence down a little bit, it becomes:
1)Sarah crouched down
2)to pick up
3)the folded piece of paper.

The verb in phrase 1 is the one that describes what the subject, Sara, is doing. This verb tells us what tense the sentence is in.
The verb in phrase 2 describes what Sara is doing to the piece of paper in phrase 3.
The verb in phrase 3 is merely describing the piece of paper.

You could also change the sentence around to make it present tense or future tense.
Sarah crouches down to pick up the folded piece of paper.
Sarah will crouch down to pick up the folded piece of paper.

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#143 MadelineLime

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Posted 17 March 2012 - 05:50 PM

I have a question. :mellow:

My professor said that the sentence "That was her on the phone a while ago" is grammatically wrong and that "her" should be replaced with "she" which is in the nominative case. Well, never in my life have I read or heard such a sentence as "That was she on the phone." Why is that so? :blink:


You could avoid the whole thing by saying, "she was on the phone a while ago." In whatever context it would be used in conversation, e.g.: "where is Sandra?" "She was on the phone a while ago," the context is completely implied and you can avoid using the "that was..." portion. Or even use "that earlier phone call was Sandra,"/"that phone call earlier was Sandra."

Actually I don't believe the above is a run-on sentence. Here is my example:

John loves rebecca he is madly in love.

It's missing the proper punctuation. There are two different ideas incorrectly combined.
The correct way to write this would be:

John loves Rebecca. He is madly in love.

It's usually best to break the sentences down into two simpler sentences. Sure it's really simple and basic, but it's also the proper way to do it.


While it is made of different ideas, they are related and can stay as a single sentence. I make mistakes in proper English sometimes, as I had trouble memorizing grammar in school, but I am a native speaker. There are a few ways that you could use the run-on example in conversation, whether or not it's perfectly correct. (Sorry! I think these are correct, though! lol)

As stated previously, "John loves Rebecca. He is madly in love."

You could also use:
  • John loves Rebecca; he is madly in love.
  • John loves Rebecca... he is madly in love.
  • John loves Rebecca, he is madly in love.

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  • I'm a huge fan of semi-colons, and feel they do not get enough love!
  • I am also a huge fan of ellipsis. However, most people use them incorrectly. An ellipsis has only three periods in it, and a fourth is uses to end a sentence. Examples: "blah blah blah...." blah blah blah...? "blah blah blah...!"
  • The comma might not be completely correct, but most native English speakers would not even notice. I am questioning it, but I'm not entirely sure.

While I'm on about ellipsis, I highly suggest reading the link I made to it. They have so many uses!

#144 Alcadeias

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Posted 13 April 2012 - 09:37 AM

Need info on Paragraph Writing.

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Posted 27 June 2012 - 09:43 AM

^When writing a paragraph, you must have at least three lines/sentences in the paragraph, but you can have up to about six/seven. You should leave 1/2 lines/sentences space inbeetween each paragraph. Or you can do this: // \\ at the beginning if you forget to leave a gap, as far as I know. Make any sense?
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#146 Alcadeias

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Posted 13 August 2012 - 03:13 AM

^When writing a paragraph, you must have at least three lines/sentences in the paragraph, but you can have up to about six/seven. You should leave 1/2 lines/sentences space inbeetween each paragraph. Or you can do this: // \\ at the beginning if you forget to leave a gap, as far as I know. Make any sense?


not much, need to know about the content of sentences, and how it should be related.

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Posted 14 August 2012 - 02:19 PM

not much, need to know about the content of sentences, and how it should be related.


Hmm, like how the first sentence should introduce the topic or subtopic, the second three should support it and the third should wrap it up?
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Posted 06 December 2012 - 11:14 AM

Question: is it incorrect to use ellispses in formal writing? My teacher says so and I can't understand why. When are you not supposed to use them and how do you know?

If I save you then you will be saved but if I don't save you you will not be saved but the world will still go on therefore saving you is not significant however due to the fact I can't read people's minds or predict what they will do unless I have some clue or psychic powers hence regardless of whether I save you or not I don't know if the next person will be kind enough as such but if by some action of mine you survive no matter how severe the injuries you will still be alive therefore I will have saved you. If fate predicts everything then fate can also predict the changes that will be made in it but they won't be changes as they will have been predicted. But it seems you will be far from saved by the time I finished writing this. Since it is apparently up to me I save you. Though this you can be anyone as I have not specified and/or can be negating the fact I have to save the person above me.





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